The Lone Cloud

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by God_Is_My_Judge, May 12, 2012.

  1. I have written this due to the boringness of my life >.>Ok, enjoy the story!( If there is even anyone wanting to read this)

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    Chapter 1(Part One)- Last of a kind

    "Hey!"a voice behind me said. As I turned around, a girl in a plain white dress came to my vision. She had a fair complexion, rosy cheeks and a wide smile on her face. I was captivated by her smile, like a bee to the sweet smelling nectar of a flower.

    "Hey~You have been staring at me for a while now, you know?" the girl said slightly annoyed and pouting then a slight smile creeped at the side of her mouth. Was I her friend? I don't know. The next thing I know, she kissed my lips for a moment and then pulled away...

    "Till the next time we meet... Byakuran..." she smiled and waved.Her image starts to blur, I tried to reach my hands out to her but to no avail... Then I opened my eyes, the smell of rotten flesh greeted my nose. It was a dream... but it all felt so real...

    How long was I asleep... I opened my eyes but the world was pitch-black. Still, I felt tired as if I should lay here till I die. My body didn't want to move. A bloody gash at my stomach... done by them...

    Suddenly, a bright light engulfed my dark world. I closed my eyes and opened it slowly, adjusting to the light intensity. So... this is the end of me? Have they found me? The questions kept on coming as my eyes finally adjusted to the light intensity. It was then I saw...

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    .____. Second time writing... Do comment... Point out anything that I did wrong, I will accept willingly... Erm yea that's all Although I think this will not be read with all the RPs and all the bumps...
     
  2. I'VE ALREADY READ THIS. >:L
     
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    ~MyHandisADolphin~
     
  4. I love it  its very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter