HURRY UP
Hannah's POV As I walked into StarBucks with my boyfriend Josh, I looked around at the people there, there were some people sitting on chairs and drinking and others standing and chatting. I noticed a guy sitting at a table alone , I recognised him as Rhyan Gill, he was Josh's best friend and the ex-boyfriend of my best friend Lily Summers. Me and him weren't really friends at this point. I looked up at him and he looked up at me and I looked away quickly. I could feel my cheeks burning up and I groans and though to myself: Please tell me I'm not falling in love with him. I looked back a few moments later to find that Josh had gone and so had Rhyan. I sighed and sat on a table, looking around for Rhyan. After around five or ten minutes of searching for him I finally found him over at the counter, he was paying for his drink and getting a tissue. I walked up to him and reached out my hand to grab a menu, god I was hungry! As I reached out my hand I felt my hand brush against his and I let out a little gasp of shock. I felt a spark shoot straight from his hand all the way up to my head. I looked up at him and saw his shocked expression. I chuckled and blew a cheeky kiss at him and I said "See ya later... Hot stuff." I winked at him and walked out the cafe. (The next day) I decided to go out for a walk to try to clear my already confused mind, I was just walking into my favourite shop when I bumped into someone (Uh, correction, actually they bumped into me!). I looked up to see who had bumped into me and I saw it was Rhyan. I stepped back so I could take in his figure, he had short black hair that stood out against him olive-toned skin. I looked into his round hazel brown eyes and got lost in their beauty. He gave a slight chuckle and asked me "What's your name?" I blinked and answered quickly "My name is Hannah, Hannah Roberts." I felt my phone vibrate and I took it out. I had a text from dad... I looked back up at Rhyan and said "I'm sorry... My dad needs me back at home." I kissed his cheek then sprinted home, looking back to see that handsome man that I loved, shocked and rather confused. I gave a little chuckle then ran home, letting my long brown hair blow back behind me. Sorry for the long wait guys! Feedback in needed!
Bump it's amazing just u put though instead if thought ur a better writer so u should do the story
Mistake page 3 rhyan asked what your name was. And on this page rhyan asked what your name was again