Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. ii like the story  bump!!!!!!







     
  2.  No way?!.... I think you should finally drop the bomb on who Rick's brother finally is! Let Chelsea overreeact and let Rick finally 'fess up! :3

     Blump.
     
  3. Bump omg u have to update ur story is fascinating It took me 3 hours straight to read it I love it ur a wonderful writer u no how to keep ppl interested and u no how to leave ppl hanging I love ur style continue writing!!!
     
  4. OH SNAP! Poor jake, he just killed his "brother", but then again, maybe Rick shouldn't had been playing in traffic.
     
  5. Lol! Great twist there.

    And NO, it's not boring! These twists keep it fresh ;)
     
  6. Lol Jakes so stupid  why would he say that?
    Bump!
     
  7. Gotta love Jake 
     
  8. Nuu the story wont ever be boring to me  bumpdate now  cant wait what happens next 
     
  9. Bump!! And  I'm just like Jake! But instead of stupid, I'm forgetful i would be the one to blow the cover
     
  10. Wow! Good post, now this is what I'm looking for, seeing both side of the story as it goes along.. Cool!! Cant wait for more updates!!
     
  11. NUU! This cannot be in the second page! BUMPBUMP! Jake, oh, Jake.
     
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  13. Bumpit. Eliza, it's not boring. I love it! 
     
  14. Bumping this back to the first page! Where it belongs!! 24/7!!