Beyond Good and Evil

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *FashionablyOnTime (01), May 5, 2012.

  1. This is part of Adam's challenge I was inspired by this video game. So now I will go more in-depth.
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    Chapter 1: Home Invasion

    Jade's POV

    Fehn and I were meditating on the high hill, only a few feet away from the lighthouse. Fehn is one of the kids who's parents were taken by the DomZ. The lighthouse is in "The Hillys" where Mammago garage, Black Island, Looters cave, Meteropolis factory, the races, and the slaughterhouse are located. The DomZ are these alien attackers, who we have been at war with for almost 20 years now.

    I am just sitting silently with Fehn, then I open my eyes and a giant green vortex shoots open "The DomZ..."

    Fehn jumps up "Jade!" with terror in his eyes.

    "Fehn jump on!" I motion for him to jump on my back and when he does I run to the lighthouse.

    "Hurry Jade!" he screams as the DomZ meteors start falling.

    "Go get Pey'J!!!" I yell and try to power up the forcefield as Fehn runs off. The forcefield blinks on.

    You optimus account is empty you are in debt 350 credit

    "What!? You can't just shut it off!" The forcefield turns off, leaving us defenseless.

    I then see the children screaming for me why aren't they inside!? "GET BACK INSI-... A DomZ meteor falls right in front of them and they trip into the hole.

    "N-No!!!" Then the DomZ ghost monsters come out of the hole with the children trapped inside them!!!

    The DomZ are taking control of the childrens mind and using their energy!!! I have to help them!