first story: THE... I don't know what to call it

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by abs140, May 4, 2012.

  1. First up, Capital letters. Names, pronouns, starting sentences, etc. Caps ON.

    Next, Quotation marks ("") no to be mean, but this is a story, not a script.

    Description too. It helps a lot. And paragraphs, it helps us read easier.

     
  2. I'm sorry I just wanted to write a story I didn't want this to be too mean dash 
    also this is boring because IT IS THE BEGINNING AND IT ISNT JUST A ROMANCE STORY THERE. WILL. BE. A. TWIST. SOON.
    (once I update maybe) I also already have spell check on -_- :( as I said I just wanted to write a story and I have taken in flubs thing about adjectives and flub was first I said ok then... oh nevermind
     
  3. yeah the andi I'm just doing what they think and write to themselves then I do story in between that
     
  4. You need to be careful of your grammar.

    1st bump: (beginning of story)

    Since I was 4 I did not see my dad anymore.
     
  5. yeah I figured after I read that I missed a word
     
  6. ATTENTION: DO NOT WRITE ANY REPLYS ABOUT THAT GRAMMAR AND ANYTHING ELSE SAID I ALREADY AM TRYING TO IMPROVE THAT 
     
  7. I AM ALREADY *
     
  8. It's a good first attempt. Use this as a first draft. Keep updating and then use the constructive criticism to make it better, Em.
     
  9. I am glad you are working on improving and not taking the constructive criticism badly :D I know it the people who comment on my story and give me feedback really help :D
     
  10. thanks khris and yeah thanks smiley :)
     
  11. I'm just trying to help. 
     
  12. oh btw andi your stories are really good I read one :)\ my stupid brain can't remember what its called:\)
     
  13. its ok andi
     
  14. Thanks, though I don't know what I should be apologizing for...oh well. Um..my two stories that are on going now are I Think I Love You (sequel to Crush On You) and Different. I think you read Different. 
     
  15. I think crush on you rings a bell 
     
  16. Andi your stories are good 