Safe and Sound.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Mar 31, 2012.

  1. Oh my god this brought tears to my eyes you are such a talented writer i love this so much!! BUMP
     
  2. I almost cried
     
  3. Thanks for all the feedback
    I like getting actual comments and critiscm rather than bumps. It encourages me to write better
     
  4. Aww so sad. Why isn't Isaac telling her he actually is the Isaac? 
     
  5. Aw I love this. It's so good! Elle your a great writer
     
  6. Sorry Guys! My Prom was this weekend, so I've been busy!

    Update
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    "Issac, you need to get her out of here!" Anne whispered fiercely, as I stood behind the corner and heard every word.

    "How am I supposed to do that Anne!?" Issac was very upset, judging by his voice, his blood was boiling.

    "Issac!!! I don't WANT that here! The town is already talking!!! She's a JEW. I hate her and her religion and you shpuld too!!! You were a soldier!!!!" Anne was harsh, and I wished with every drop of hate in my body, that I could put her in the shoes of all the dead, lost Judes.

    "I WAS FORCED ANNE! You know d-mm well they gave me death or life with the Füher!!!!" Issacs voice rose sharply, in pain.

    "OUT! By tomorrow!!!!!" Anne screamed and I sank to the floor. I had to go. I had to leave and find another way to sustain life.

    Anne stormed into her room and slammed the door shut. I looked into the kitchen at Issac, who suddenly slammed his fist into the wall behind him. He let a sound that was sooo deep and evil it was like a growl, and it scared me.

    Issac fell into the floor and began whispering to himself. I could barely make it out-

    "I almost lost you once... I can't loose you again."

    I didn't understand why hecwas making such a fit of this. I couldn't stand it. It reminded me too much of him...

    "Issac..." I stepped out of the shadowed hall towards him.
    He looked up and I saw him crying.

    "Kira, I-"

    "No... I'll go. I can't be that special to you... I've only been here a week.. I'll be fine. I-"

    "Stop that. You can't go out there. You'll be killed."

    "I need to. You and Anne-"

    "I was forced to marry Anne for war reasons. I do not love her. I can't."
    His eyes bore into mine. D-mmit he was too much like my Issac.

    "I should go..."

    "Please Kira." He touched my hand slightly, as if it could make me stay..

    "I can't. This is not my home."

    "You don't have a home!!!! This can be your home." Issac raised his voice at me, and I could see the pained rage behind his flaming eyes.

    "I can go anywhere!!! It's not my place to stay!!!" I yelled back and held my tears inside.

    "It is if I say you can!!!!"

    "Anne doesn't want ne here! No one does!!! I'm a Jew ! You are a Nazi!!! You should hate me!!!!"

    "Thats impossible! Kira. I need you to stay!!!" He screamed. So loudly, I had to step away.

    I stepped to the door. "I must go. You don't need me. I'm just a Jew." I opened the door and stepped out.

    "Kira!" Suddenly, Issac was behind me, holding my body tightly against his. His arms enveloped me, his eyes looked straight into mine.

    "Iss-" His lips formed over mine, with such intense passion, my heart stopped in my chest. His arms were so tight around me, I leaned backwards, but I couldn't pull away. His lips moved against mine, with such furious, impatient passion. Our lips moved as one, hungry for the sensual flame that burned between us. His arms loosened, and his lips moved, but they were only centimeters away from mine.

    Our breath mingled together his nose rested against mine, as our eyes looked at eachother.

    There was something in his eyes, I couldn't process it, but I knew ot was there. It made me want to stay.

    "I-" I stumbled on my words and broke my body away from him.

    I began running up the stone path, away from him, breaking into tears. I didn't love him. I had betrayed my Issac.

    "Kira!!! Stop ! Please!" He screamed and ran after me. I ran harder.

    "Sunshine I can't loose you again!!!" He screamed.

    Sunshine?
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    'Good Morning Sunshine!' I opened my eyes and 12 year old Issac Stern stood before me.
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    'Wake up Sunshine!!' Issac lay beside me in the damp forest, only several months ago..
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    Sunshine?

    Did he just say that to me?

    I stopped and his arms caught me in their grasp.

    I pulled away and looked him deep into the eyes. How didn't I see it before?


    "Issac?"

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  7. OH MI GAWSH! 

    Such a good update, it brought tears to my eyes. 
     
  8. Ahh this is amazing, bump!
     
  9. Oh my god oh god im dead
     
  10. Just your spelling!! And give more description to build up to a certain vital part. Some kind of suspense. 

    Other than that, AMSMFMRMXLGMSMTNWNFNMWKFNTNSMFNRMSKGK HELP ME EKSKGKMEFKG.
     
  11. Awwww. Watch Anne get super pissed
     
  12. Bumpz..it's amazing 
     
  13. Love Love Love it!! 
    Bump it up! YAY! 
     
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    "Issac?" I stepped back from him and looked deeply into his eyes. Filled with a nervous tension, I couldn't breathe, so I stared at him in silence.

    "Kira I-. . . " He paused, then bit his lip, "It's not what you think.. I couldn't tell you.."

    Couldn't tell me? After so much heartache, he couldn't tell me he was alive? After he sat and watched me blame myself for his death, he couldn't even tell me?

    "You lied." I said through clenched teeth, as I held in my tears. I couldn't cry anymore for him..

    "Kira I'm married. I didn't think I could just get up and leave Anne just because..." Issac couldn't look me in the eyes..

    "Because what!" I spat, basking in my self pity.

    "Because I care about you so much." He clenched his right fist, and reached for me with his left hand. "Kira, you know I couldn't ever hurt you right?"

    "No Issac!!!! You hurt me whenever you left me to think you were dead!!! I watched them load the gun, I heard the gun go off! How could I not be completely devastated?!" I was screaming then, being irrational.

    "Do you think that I didn't worry myself d-mn sick thinking that you were out there dead at a camp!???" His deep voice overpowered mine.

    "You could have told me!!! I cried on your shoulder for a week thinking about how I was at fault for killing you!!"

    "You weren't! I'm alive!"

    "Then go live your d-mn life Issac. You obviously don't need me in it."
    I turned away and let tears spill down my cheeks. All the while there was silence..

    I heard him breathing behind me... So close.. So alive. There was an empty silence for so long; a palpable tension that was so thick and cold.

    I heard his feet treading closer behind me, my curiousity breached as he stopped behind me. Slowly, his arms wrapped round me and his breath found my neck.. I felt small electric tingles as he exhaled on my exposed skin.

    "Kira...." He whispered, ever so softly, it was like the wind was rustling by my ears. "Is it true?"

    I slightly turned my head, to acknowledge his question. I had no idea what he was about to ask, but I felt my heart beat to the point of exploding inside of my chest with the suspense of his question.

    "You said you love me.." His voice was eager and almost broken, as his words licked at the nape of my neck.
    It made my soul burn for him. I needed him soo much.

    All I could whisper through my drying tears was, "I do.."

    I could almost hear him smiling behind me.. His breath became heavier, but he maintained his hushed, wind like voice.. "I love you too.."

    I turned to him quickly and looked into his deep blue eyes. "I need you," I thought outloud.

    "Kira..." His lips wrapped themselves around my name, and he closed his eyes. I gently placed my hand behind his neck and rested my cheek on his sturdy chest.

    "Issac.." My voice came out in a raspy whisper, and his hands entangled themselves into my hair, pulling me closer.

    Everything went silent as our lips crashed together with need, not want. My breaths became ragged as we kissed furiously placing our lips anywhere they could reach.

    His lips found my neck as his arms pulled my body tightly to his. I knew how much I needed him with me..

    He pulled away suddenly, then put my cheeks in his hands. "I'll never let you go.."

    My heart stopped as I breathed in his words. "Never let me go. I need you..." I spoke accidently...

    Issac gripped my hands in his, "Kira, I need you with me so much more..."

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  15. Aww so sweet 
    Bump! 
     
  16. Aww!!!!! I love it bump!!
     
  17. Aww it's the cutest thing ever! Bump!