Knight

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Goldialocks, Apr 20, 2012.

  1. XD oh lord Danny.
     
  2. oh Faith. So mean.
    I love this!
     
  3. Oh. Oh my. 
     
  4. This is so amazing!
     
  5. This NEEDS to be on the first page!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  6. When is this story going to be updated?!
     
  7. Please update, Chloe <3
     
  8. Sorry for the long wait!

    This is comedic relief. I can't think of a good chapter lately.

    Well, that, and you get a bonus of a character's flashback. And this time, it's a NEW CHARACTER INTRODUCTION!!
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    Flashback #1
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    ???'s P.O.V
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    ---Flashback---
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    "You pitiful dog... All alone, barking, with no one to hear..."

    The man's breath was hot on my skin, the area of my neck was exposed to his fangs. The tip of the teeth grazed my flesh, as his eyes never left my body's.

    "So pitiful indeed..."

    His hand roughly grabbed my chin's and turned me to look at him, an intent stare was plastered onto his face. His facial features were alluring, his cheek bones refined and his eyes had depth.

    "And it's almost heart breaking to see such an adorable puppy die alone in the cold, raining alley..."

    His voice was husky... Very husky...

    "It would shame me to leave you here to rot..."

    His fangs... They punctured the surface of my skin, beads of blood dripping from the wound.

    "Wouldn't you want to come along with me instead?"

    ---Fin---

    (Teehee, it could be male or female. :3)
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    Comedic Relief #1
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    Faith's P.O.V
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    "Owwww... Fuck you, Faithhhhhh. It buuuuurnnnnssss."

    "Shut up before I call Sydney to fetch me the holy water and stake."

    That shut him up. I almost laughed at how he struggled. It was just... Too hilarious!"

    Quincy was still struggling, but the paralysis was slowly eating away at his flesh...

    Call me a sick fuck, I enjoy torment. Sadism had always been a hobby of mine to practice.

    And who better your victim than an unrequited love?
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    Quincy's P.O.V.
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    "OH GOSH, IT FUCKING BURNS, FUCKING BITCH! SYDNEY, GO FETCH MY A PAIL OF WATER BEFORE I CLAW MY OWN EYES OUT."

    The said girl said nothing before walking over to Byakuran, slapping him with a trout she just magically pulled out of her ass before slapping him with it.

    "HADOKEN—!"

    "NO, NO!! I SAID GIVE ME A BUCKET OF WATER, NOT GIVE ME BYAKURAN CRYING ABOUT HIS FISH-SLAP-WOUNDS."

    OMG IT BURNNNS, IT BUUUURNNNSSSS. I CAN'T EVEN FEEL MY OWN VEINSSS, OH MY GOSH, NUUUUUUUUUU—

    "Oh! Sydney know! Sydney do!!"

    The girl ran out of the room, her towel falling onto the grown before she ran out. Blood immediately came out of my nose and I began screaming from the pain. After that I began twisting my spine in irregular positions that weren't even possible...

    "HADOKEN!"

    And with that Sydney threw a pail of holy water at me.
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    Comic... Relief? Dx

    *struts out with fancy cane*
     
  9. *(cut out): before slapping him with t

    ._.

    made no sense whatsoever. .-.
     
  10. Yunohavemonocle? *Throws in a monocle at Chloe*
    wonderful, darling!
     
  11. XD

    Thank you<333

    Monocles. Posh woman, posh. 8)
     
  12. *Lifts invisible top hat* :{) mustache.
     
  13. YESSSSSS. AT LAST. >:D
     
  14. Quite classy Chloe, quite. 
    Unrequited love? Faith? 
    Imani loves this story. 
     
  15. ;D 
     
  16. M-My Byakuran Got Trout Slapped!