A Walk In the Park

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), May 2, 2012.

  1. Grammar Nazi: Live

    Me:shoots the Grammar Nazi in the head-
     
  2. Yes Bekka, 0.0 indeed
     
  3. Jadett~


    I hyperventilated, and buried my face in tiny Kade's chest, crying.
    "Jade?"
    "It was my mom!" I cried, squeezing him.
    "W-Wha? Impossible!"
    "I-I know! We have to go see her!" I yelped, shaking his shoulders.

    His hazel eyes froze me into place, scaring me.
    "Jade, calm down." he said, holding my shoulders, and speaking calmly.
    "B-But-"
    "No. I said calm down, and we'll go see if that is correct."
    "O-Okay.." I mumbled, turning red in his arms.
    "Shh..." he said, standing up, holding out a hand. I took it in disbelief that my mother was alive.
     
  4. Kade~

    As I walked with her, I noticed she was shaking while holding my hand.
    "Jade?"
    "Y-Yes?"
    "Are you shaking?" I asked, holding up her hand in mine.
    "N-No, just scared..." she replied, walking closer to me.
    "Okay, just checking. You look fine, you're just shaking in my hands.
    "A-Am I?" she asked, trying to tug her hand away.
    "Yes.." I replied, walking and dragging her along.
    I'm told I'm pretty strong for how small I am, and I'm dragging Jadett with me to go see her 'Mom.'
    Besides the fact that I was at her funeral and I saw her dead body in the coffin, I'm pretty sure she's been dead.
    I whistled a note and I waited for a reply from Jade.
    It took her a minute, but she whistled back with a smile.

    I whistled three notes this time, and I sang one as well. She repeated me, and I started to hum a happy tune.
     
  5. I really like this story a lot? By the way, I updated trinket box
     
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