Father Dearest 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GoddessOfTheWaters, Apr 10, 2012.

  1. Maddie's Point of View
    IN THE PRESENT
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    My eyebrows furrowed as I tried to figure out where I was and why I was there. I could feel that this was my room, but by the looks of it, it obviously wasn't.

    The walls and windows resembled a church. The glass was colored red, green, yellow, clear, and blue. The shards of glass seemed to form a shape of a man with bright light around him. I assumed it was God. The walls were made of rocks cemented together. There was a miniature wooden desk with a shelf holding one thin book in the corner. In curiosity, I fliped my blanket off my body and started towards the desk. It felt completely awkward walking naked, but there seemed to be no clothes in the room.

    On the spine of the book, it read, "The Holy Bible". The leather cover was a bright creamish color as apposed to the traditional dark maroon. Unsatisfied, I flipped the book open to the context page. Strangely enough, it only contained, "The Beginning," and, "The Commands," as apposed to all 66 books I was familiar with. What was this? My thoughts were soon interrupted by a knock on my door.

    "Good morning dear," the woman's voice chimed as she entered my room. She was wearing nothing at all. It was utterly disturbing. Her breasts were sagging as if there were weights weighing them down. Forcing myself to look upwards, I saw a iridescent shimmer in her eyes. The same thing I had seen in Eve's eyes. "Oh dear! You should get ready for class! You are going to be late!" She scurried over to me and took a hold of my shoulders, steering me to the bathroom.

    I still couldn't make sense of what this was. It was impossible that I had actually changed the past instead of my visions being a trivial dream. But, if that had just been a dream, why was the world this way? Was this another dream? Where were my parents? Would I ever be able to see them once more? Had sin never happened? Had Jesus never happened?

    Instead of continuing with my endless train of thought, I got ready for what seemed to be school.
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    Strangely enough, this new location contained all the electronics I was used to.

    "Maddie!" I whipped my head around to see more naked girls running towards me, jiggling. They all carried the same tote I had found on my desk.

    "Who are you?" I asked cluelessly.

    "You're silly," the blonde with the tiger eyes giggled. "I'm Kate, that's Rachel and that's Karen!" She squeaked as she pointed to the two other girls. I assumed we were friends and acted as if I knew them from that point on. They all had exotic model-esque features. As Kate spoke, I noticed an awkward kink in her voice. It seemed almost... robot like, but I had to be imagining it. Yes, this was all imaginary.

    The school was identical to the one that I had attended to in the normal world, but that was impossible. Why was I in the right place, but with the wrong people?

    As I entered, I was immediately struck by the nakedness around me. Not only were the girls not wearing anything, but the boys were nude as well! I forced myself to look no lower that eye level.

    At the beginning of class, no teacher was present, but all the students were perfectly silent. The door slid open as a man strolled in, but with a cloth around his waist, covering from his hip to his lower-thigh area. The man got to his podium and dropped his books. He gave me a never-ending stare that showed longing. Finally, I realized who he was. It couldn't be, but it was. His face hadn't changed. Josh.
     
  2. shoot... wrong story... ignore that...
     
  3. Who's maddie?? Im confuzzeled
     
  4. It's on the wrong story, like I said.
     
  5. Update it already
     
  6. Sorry guys... I just feel so uninspired right now. The roleplays make me want to stop writing.
     
  7. Ugg! I here by BANNISH all roleplays...I wish
     
  8. You haven't updated in so long!
     
  9. Sorry... I'm just so... distracted. CHECK OUT THE FAN FICTION CLUB THREAD!
     
  10. I decided not to leave. I think I might update today, but I'm not sure. Who's still reading?
     
  11. I am!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEE update! Do it for the children!...sort of...mostly do it for me...?
     
  12. Me!! ᏰᏌᎷᎮ!!