Unbelievable 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *smiley234 (01), Apr 18, 2012.

  1. Dimitri's pov

    I gasp in surprise when she mouths my name. I stare into here eyes and I can feel and sense the pain she is feeling. I look behind and around her wondering were she is. I mouth back to her, "what's going on?" she frowns and shrugs her shoulders. I smile trying to put on a happy face for her "Im going to save you Bianca" I mouth to her. Shes about to smile as she gets pulled back and struck. I gape at the tall very muscular man. He yells insults at her and kicks her. She looks at me bleeding at the mouth and nose and mouths to me she loves me. The screen goes black..."Bianca!!" I scream. I begin to gain consciousness..
     
  2. Bump update again.... Please
     
  3. Bumpdate!!
     
  4. Flashback- Dimitri's pov


    One of the most vivid days of my childhood memories would be that cloudy, October Sunday. When Bianca saved my life. She's modest, so she doesn't like to refer to the "incident" in that specific way. Well anyway... I woke up that day completely alert because I knew that our parents were gone and Bianca and I could spend the day doing whatever we would like. Our parents were to caught up in their lives to care about their 13 year old daughter, and their 14 year old son. I woke up Bianca, and told her we were going on am adventure. She smiled at me and quickly got dressed. When she was finally done I was already at the bottom of the stairs waiting. We walked out our red mahogany door and I personally felt like the day belonged to us. As we walked we held hands. Obviously, at the time it wasn't weird, honestly it felt right to have her petite, soft hand in mine. As we walked and our arms swinging between us, I told her we should explore the woods. She laughed at me because she knew I had no sense of direction. We walked through them anyway, and the lushes' greenery took my breath away. Just the swooping green leaves that caressed the ground, and the different colored moss growing everywhere, or even the fact that if you sat there and listened you would be able to here a plethora of exotic spuds. From beautiful winged birds to the small insect that burrows around in the leaf covered dirt. Bianca led me through the forest like she knew the way, when in reality she was using that sixth sense that I always knew she had. The sixth sense always showed her were she needed to be. I followed her deeper and deeper into those wonderful woods. I decided to start to race her through the opening in the woods that was just up a head. She giggled as she chased me through those woods. I was lost in the running, and all I could here is the echoes of her laughter bouncing off the trees, and the soft thud of my boots on the wet earth. I breath through the undergrowth and realize it's an interstate highway. I am about to turn around and yell back at her to stop, when I turn to look in front of me, and I am blinded by headlights the size of watermelons. I sheald my eyes and I turn an look away. All I feel is the rush of air leaving my lungs. I open my eyes to Bianca looking down on me, with the most worried look in her eyes. I smile at her and thank her a billion times. I hug her until she can't breath and is gasping for breath. All she says is "Dimitri let's go home I'm starving." From that day on, I knew it was my job to protect her.
     
  5. Gives me feedback :D haha I know they're some minor errors
     
  6. Bump please keep going love it :)
     
  7. Continue with the story 
     
  8. Updating later 
     
  9. Bianca's pov

    I feel agonizing pain as I get pulled by my hair up those faraway steps. I slowly start to loose consciousness from the pain. I fight against it, knowing full well that if I faint I won't be out for long. The man keeps pulling me harder and harder. I wince every time I hit a step. When we finally get to the top, the door open, and I am shoved through with a force that has me flailing to catch myself.I catch myself barely, before my face meets the ground. I am about to sit up when I see my hand is resting on a shoe. I look up and stare into the eyes of my supposedly deceased aunt.

    Dimitri's pov 

    I wake up in the nurses office with a throbbing head ache. I moan in pain, as the nurse runs over with an ice pack. "I thought u would be out forever!" she says with sigh of relief. I moan again a little louder this time. The nurse leaves the room finally catching the hint. I close my eyes, but I can't get over the sterile smell that keeps wafting my nose. I open my eyes to see the door a jar. I get up and close it not wanting anyone to see me in this state. I clump back down on the sofa and try to catch some sleep.
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  10. Ooh, this is why my aunts scared me when I was little.
     
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