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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by PieSexual, Apr 17, 2012.
Ben-smiles at her singing-
Marisol: *Holds him out to Ben*
Ben-holds Zacl in my arms and smiles at Marisol- So do you like our creatio ?
Marisol: *Smiled and nods tiredly*
-Screams in pain and collapses on the floor-
-Scrambles away from Sandy- I want my auntie back!
-Tries to go back to Marisol-
Opal: Sits beside a lake Tianna: Sleeps
Sandy: *Growls* She's gone already, and so is your mother!
Opal: Continues sitting beside the lake Tianna: Sits under a tree
Ben-putting Zack to sleep-
Marisol: *Trying to stand up*
Ben-sees Marisol and softly pushes her down- Rest, dont get out of bed
Marisol: Tch... *Groans, pushing herself back up* Being a doll gave me Some advantages..
Opal: Sitting near the lake Tianna: Walks around
Ben-chuckles- Like the one of getting such a handsome fiance? -smirks-
Marisol: *Purrs slightly* Your lucky I can't stand for another day.
Ben-laughs and smiles- Do you want to see him again
Marisol: He needs to sleep and you need to go before I do somethin...
Ben-and what is tht?