Introduction (Now, this is a story a made up, so it may not be good. But idc...) Okay, this story is fake, and is "out there". It is also long. What does your soul do inside your body? You have a "container" or "house" that your soul lives/stays in. There are also demonic souls that are pure evil. You can capture a "demon" soul, if your "house/container" is attractive enough. The demon souls also grant powers. If your normal human soul isn't strong enough the demon soul will take over your body. (With that being said many would think, "Well, if it's the most attractive house/container then you would have a ton of demonic souls and would turn pure evil") Well, you can only have 1 soul per container/house. But, people can give you their house/container if they want to, but there is a 60% chance that person will die. But your human soul has to control your demon souls. Usually people are born with 1-2 containers for a demon soul and their soul. Story There was a husband and wife that had two containers each. They both had a good, strong, sturdy human soul, and a powerful demon soul. (The human souls are in control) They had a baby, with 1 container. His name was Phillip. The couple was known for trying to rid the world of demons. And they would go and kill the leader of all the demons. Known as the "Devil and Satan". Satan and the couple had an extremely long and badass battle. The child was safely hidden in a cave, 20 yards away from the battle site. The wife gave Phillip her container, and died. The father ripped satan's soul out and forced it into Phillip. Giving Phillip the struggle of keeping satan's soul under control. The husband also gave his container to Phillip and vanished... Let me know what you guys think, if I get enough likes i'll type more up.
First... 20 yards away from battle is safe for a child? They were trying to slay demons, then turned their son into one? what suck people And sure.. Keep writing
Phillip started to grow the body of a demon... Trying to harness the energy of Satan his skin starts turning red, and his eyes are becoming pure black... An old man walks by, and touches Phillip's forehead. Taking some of satan's soul and transfering it into a liquid, for emergencies, and pours it into a cup. Phillip passes out, returning to his normal human form... The old man takes phillip to a city called "Demonville" where a "demon-dojo" is located to train Phillip's skills...
my suggestion: Next time, when you are writing a story, try not to write information like that. It would be better if you let the reader find out and slowly introduce the info throughout the beginning of the story... Just a thought.
As Phillip and the old man arrive in Demonville and enter the dojo, Phillip sees kids, teens, even adults trying to master or figure out their demon's power/abillity. The old man gave phillip a leaf and said "Focus on burning the leaf". The moment phillip's hand touched the leaf it burst into flames, creating ash. The old man told phillip to focus on creating controlled fire, and he did so. Then the old man had a student and phillip face off. Phillip jabbed his fist toward the student, and it created a fist, made of fire! A few jabs and kicks and the student was out cold, or hot in his case.
The old man gave Phillip a quest. The quest was to go into "Werewolves' Cave" and gain some experience in fighting. The cave had a numerous amount of animal skeletons, and a few human skeletons. A werewolf dashed by Phillip at an incredible speed. Smacking him 50 yards back... Phillip produces a fireball in his palm, and threw it. Far. Scorching the werewolf and almost killing it. He then proceded with 10 mini fireballs, one for each finger, and threw them at the werewolf, killing it. He then proceeded to skin the werewolf, to make a good coat/blanket for later. Getting deeper into the cave, phillip realized the werewolves were bigger and stronger. Phillip wanted a demon soul, but would a werewolf have one? And how would he absorb it?
At the end of the cave was the evilest, biggest werewolf he had seen, could it possibly have a demon soul? If phillip could somehow create his fire into a chain, he could wrap the soul and the demon soul would have to go to him. Right? The werewolf yelled "HALT! You have no right to face me! You are to weak!" Phillip made his fire into a kantana, and sliced the werewolf across the chest. The instant that happend the werewolf vanished, just like his father. On the floor layed a wooden mask, it had strange markings made out of -what seemed to be- blue blood. He slid the mask on and passed out. In the middle of a cave infested by werewolves.