the innocent (a historical story in ww2)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *colinaidas (01), Apr 25, 2012.

  1. I still remember the first time I killed a man. It was in world war two and he was Jewish but yet he was the same as me. But for you to understand I have to start back before the war had started.
    Chapter 1
    The dream of the third Reich
    It all started when the man known as Adolf Hitler rose to power in Germany. I was still just nineteen but Hitlers words moved me so deeply that I joined the Nazi regime. I learned that hitler believed that there was a master race and it was the arynns. Blondes with blue eyes I was ecstatic because I was blonde with blue eyes I was a future master of man. How exciting then we were told of how the jews plotted to prevent us from taking power and that Jews needed to be killed so we could rule and I believed every word of it as I was young and naive.
     
  2. Don't make this it may offended some people
     
  3. Like who it's a story about a soldier who realizes everything hes been told was a lie and the real evil is hitler and then goes into freeing Jews from death camps
     
  4. It might offend some Germans I'm just saying it might the Holocaust is a touchy subjecy
     
  5. I'm just saying the Holocaust is a touchy subject
     
  6. I am German and that means I'm allowed to use it as long as it isn't racist at all which there wont be any racist remarks because I am not racist I think the holocaust was horrid but I got the idea for this after seeing a pic in English of a mass grave and it just wrote itself pretty much
     
  7. Chapter2
    The hope of germania
    I remember meeting hitler and being amazed by his confidence. I also was shocked that he was leader of Germany but not a arynn how could this be possible. He told me he knew that I went to school for architecture and asked me to design a new germany to be called germania. I was honored and agreed and so built a design it would have versions of monuments 3 times bigger. Hitler told me that I had done something beautiful. He said I had brought to life his dream of germania. I was truly honored now and so thanked the fuhrer for the opportunity to design it. He then asked me to oversee construction of it I agreed and we started with it we made tunnels for trains. Then ww2 broke out.
     
  8. It's pretty good
     
  9. You need to use paragraphs so your main plot is easy to follow
     
  10. I'll take that into consideration
     
  11. Chapter3
    Blitzkrieg
    Blitzkrieg the fuhrer used that word to describe his plan. It literally meant lightning war how interesting I thought. His plan was for the Luftwaffe to go and bomb first then the soldiers and artillery would follow.
    The poles wouldn't stand a chance they had germany on one side and Russia on the other. A double invasion incredible that it could be coordinated so well. I did not participate in that invasion. I was a little disappointed but also relieved I don't think I was ready to kill yet.
    It was a success we captured Poland. The fuhrer was very happy. Then came something shocking. The Brits and the Canadians declared war against us because of the invasion. Hitler was absolutely furious.
     
  12. When I get 5 bumps from 5 different people I will add another chapter
     
  13. Chapter4
    Operation Barbarossa
    We invaded Russia and violated our non-aggression pact. I was put into a team with one goal kill the Jewish rebels. We went from town to town. We only got to kill the Jews that we found I only found one.
    I still remember that moment as if it happened only five minutes ago and not 15 years ago. The Jew I found was a man a simple shoe maker. The others had already executed their Jews now it was my turn.
    I remember the the sight of the man kneeling in front of me but he did not looked scared just sad. I remember the feel of the cold steel handle of the gun in my hand. I remember the smell of smoke as the gun fired and the crack of the shot. I still taste the vomit as if it were still in my mouth. I just killed a man but he wasn't anything like I was told he would be. He didn't hate me he didn't attack me he actually seemed to pity me.
    I killed him and his only crime was being Jewish.
    I swore to myself that I would not harm another Jew that I would help Jews survive. I would do the right thing even if it killed me. Hitler was the real evil one.
     
  14. Can I start a ww2 rp?
     
  15. (no this is being done because I had the urge to write something like this)
     
  16. Only going to get better