 Deadly Sin 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Feb 3, 2012.

  1. This Story is still good but not as good as it began :/ but other than that its goodtbh the shadow clan and all that stuff kind of messed it up a little.sorry about this commentbut it's still good
     
  2.  U R CRAZY!!!! BUMPDATE!! AMAZING!!! 
     
  3. Oh my Goodness, thanks for the input!
    >.< whenever I need to deepen the storyline with an antagonistic force of some kind, I present too much information at once, instead of gradually including it :3
    that and I didn't get a chance to go through the update one last time!
    A zillion thanks!
     
  4. AHHHH!!! I just stayed up all night reading this and pie this is amazing!!!!!! You are so talented, I'm so jealous of your ninja like writing skilz! When she punched Leah I was "haha yea! What now bitch" n my fam just kinda of starred at me like I was insane please update soon!!
     
  5. OMG what happens to Jade now 
     
  6. Bump *gasp* I found this on the second page
     
  7. bridget!

    And I love this story!
     
  8. Bumping this back to the first page
     
  9. amazing as always. BUMP
     
  10. BUMPDATE! I love this story!!! I await your update... 
     
  11. To the first page!
     
  12. TO THE FIRST PAGE!!!!! AWAY!!!!!
     
  13. Bump from the fourth page
     
  14. Sorry I haven't updated in a bit 
    I'm kinda busy… I promise an update in the next few days or sooner.
     
  15. BUUUUMMMPPPPPPP!!!!!!!
     
  16. U left me uninfirmed of your updates i gad to catch back up
    But akunamatata  im back on track can u tell me when u update