The Author's Critic Sign-Ups

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by I-Love-Oreo-Pie, Apr 22, 2012.

  1. I'm starting a new "business" called 'The Author's Critic'.

    What we do is critique stories that are requested to be critiqued. Everyone loves good comments, but every now and then, they'll need some tweaking, but not everyone one here is that honest about critiquing.

    So, I'm going to need 4 people to help me critique these stories.

    Sign-ups go here.

    In your application, please include:

    Name you go by on PIMD (I go by Oreo)
    Stories you've written on Fan Fiction
    Anything else you want to add


    Sign up below
     
  2. Should I join or no? Cowgirl is my main if anyone is confused 
     
  3. I go by Goddess, but I'm thinking about changing my name to water_goddess_818, so it will stay basically the same. I have written and not finished "Do You Hear Me?" and "One Or the Other". I am currently writing "Father Dearest" and "Mistakes." I was wrongly permanently silenced, but I promise you that I will be unsilenced very soon because I have emailed support. I am not planning on finishing the first two stories because I wrote them a long time ago, and I didn't feel anything for them anymore. If you choose me, I have great ideas, am a pretty qualified critiquer because of my skills with grammar as well as spelling, and I am not one of those people that will my be inactive without warning. I also gave you inspiration for this, so maybe that will qualify me more?I have always tried to do something like this, but the threads always ended up not working and dying. If you choose me, you won't regret it! By the way, I'm not actually cocky, I'm just marketing myself at the moment. 
     
  4. I go by the name Dem and I have written "Born Differently".
     
  5. Come on, Demonic! Sell yourself
     
  6. Ok, but how do I sell myself?
     
  7. TELL EVERYONE YOU'RE AMAZING!
     
  8. I go by Ari 

    The stories I wrote are a fail, so won't post that 

    Well that's about it 
     
  9. Qin
    Reality is a lie. and Under the Covers
    I like unicorns and analyzing things...
    Yeah.
    
     
  10. Oh... I guess the sign-up wasn't supposed to be as long as mine...-_-
     
  11. Need some more sign-ups.
     
  12. People call me either Kira, Dashie, Dasherz, or Rainbow.

    I have written Heaven or Hell which got many readers at first but it was really going nowhere. Letters to Octavia was just maybe a bit odd for most people. Life of Criticism nobody even read it which is actually just sad because if you read closely you will figure out why. Who knows where you might end up I stopped because everyone was complaining they hated my story. If and Then is a work in progress right now and I'm working on a update.

    I'm really good at critiquing story's by genre,grammar use, and spelling
     
  13. Name: MommaPie/SensualPie
    Stories: Equilibrium, Red Rose, Blood On The Ice, My Better Half, Forbidden, Deadly Sin, Frozen In Time, Painful Indulgence
    yep! … I really dunno what else to add. 
     
  14. It's funny, because you misplaced the last three commas, and you say you excel in grammar.
     
  15. Sorry I'm extremely freaked out the moment....
     
  16. And you also used the possessive form of story when you meant the plural.
     
  17. Oh my Jesus sorry!!!