Tear of Every Drop of Rain

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by RaychelElla, Jan 22, 2012.

  1. "Brooke don't you think your drinking a little too much"?,Ava asked.

    "Nope. Not at all.",I said quietly. I've been depressed ever since Caleb died.
    He had died in a car accident. He's brake weren't working. A car appeared out of nowhere.

    That day stills haunt. I was staring at a picture of me and Caleb.

    Ava caught me staring at the picture. "You wanna visit his grave?",she asked. "Sure".
    I was looking down at his grave. It was carved to beautiful.

    January 24,1995-April 16,2008.
    R.I.P. Caleb G. Martin

    I started to cry."Cmon lets go." Ava said quietly

    "I'll always love you my Caleb".

    " I love you too Brooke". My face went pale.
     
  2. *freaks out*  yaaayy! ᏰᏌᎷᎵ!! 
     
  3. Aw I remember this story
     
  4. And how I use to be the author
    Should I continue this story
     
  5. Then we'll shall move forth
     
  6. "Huh. Did you hear that"? I was just creeped from a voice that sounded mostly Caleb. "Hear what?"she sounded confused.

    " I thought I heard Caleb voice."I said quietly. " Oh god you've been spending way too much time at the graveyard!"she yelled. "I'm not kidding Ava. I legit heard his voice".

    "Yeah and I wanna be Jeydon Wale's girlfriend. Listen I know how much you miss Caleb but I don't think he wants you to be sad and depressed." "How would know? You never be in love before".

    Ava just stands and sighs. A few minutes of awkward silence has gone by. "Let's just go",she said quietly .
     
  7. Um if he was born in 1995 and died in 2008, wouldn't he only be 13. You said his brakes wern't working. 13 year olds cant drive. I also dont think a 13 year old would be drinking
     
  8. Other than that, great story
     
  9. He'd be fourteen, if he died after his birthday in Jan, but good point... But i say carry on its very good
     
  10. Whoops lemme change the date again
     
  11. BTW Do you guys who know Jeydon Wale is??
     
  12. No one reads my story....
     
  13. Also instead of Ted and Brooke being history partners they are Sėx Ed partners.
     
  14. "So what do you look in girl"? I asked. We were doing an assignment about what do we look in their opposite gender of us.

    "Well uh let's... She has rich, hot and like smarter than me." Typical jock wow just wow.

    "You sure? Anything else?" I asked again. "Uh nope nothing really. So what do you look in a guy".? Ted asked. He started to wink at me. Urgh how disgusting.

    " Well first he has to be vulnerable, hilarious, dark, intelligent, and like god he has to be just so mysterious." I said. What I just said were things I loved about Caleb .

    He told he use to talk to the moon and how it's talks back. "Wow that is a lot of stuff BB." he said. "BB? Really? I questioned. "Whatever so who's Caleb? Ted asked. "Caleb? What are talking Ted"? I asked.

    "I heard you whisper his name a couple time." he said. "Dhit". I whispered. "And I heard that too!" he laughed.
    I sighed. " Caleb was my boyfriend who I went out with since 5th grade. He died in a crash in 9th grade. He use tell "Music is mixture of life. Like every time you play music you open a new chapter in your life" I said quietly.

    "Wow Cal is wise." Ted said

    "I know right and thanks" I smiled at him.
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    If no one post like within 24hrs. I'm might cry