all of my raps I made. hope u all like it.

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *Nucleus_Zeus (01), Apr 19, 2012.

  1. 1. Quick with the flows

    youv’e gotta be fresh and innovative but keep it creative, informative
    easily relative, intertreptative but you can’t be dictavive. And if ya mumble and grumble and get muddled and stumble ya reputation will crumble to dust and rubble, so you must be humble like a bumble bee polunatin the flower i’m acumulatin the power to tower over any foe or challenger, just pick a date on the callender and you bet i’ll be there so you better be prepared to get slaughtered deported back to where ever
    you came cause ya gonna get slained, kained with my use of slang, i bring the pain but i’m not in this to gain no fame or change the game i just want people to remember my name so i remain the same old person to keep curesin the haters cause it’s incrimination and determination that’s made us realise the gift that god gave us, were tailor made in his image but he’s not finished with me yet no way Jose, there’s still more to accomplish but i aint goin to college cause i got flow’s to polish and foe’s to abbollish so i can grow my knowledge. I’m like a flower you gotta nourish or i can’t flourish i need constructive criticism to conduct the lyricism and precision and get the people to listen they won’t be dissing my shit i’m fully sick, slick, quick with the flows.

    2. Death

    Death all around the room Im feeling dizzy, it hurts to breathe this wont be easy.
    Tears fill my eyes and make my vision blurry, death came and got my best friends in a hurry.
    In heaven you will truly be able to fly, As I see you lying there I start to cry.
    Look so peaceful happy and strong, You were so young this feels so wrong.
    Tears start to fall down from my face, As they lower you down to your resting place.
    I guess you can never predict your fate, next time I see you will be at heavens gate.
    So this is my final good-bye to you, Watch over and protect me whatever you do.
    Love you always and until no ends cause you were truly my best friends.
    On January 7, 2005, I lost my buddy Trey in a trajic car ride.
    Then on May 9, that same year, Chad Wood died and had me shedding tears.
    Go pray at their grave with some gin, drink from the bottle pour some out for them.
    No parent should burry their daughter or son, but you got to remember only the good die young.

    3. My shining star

    I think she fell down from heaven
    floating down from the skies
    with her blonde hair shining
    and her beautiful blue eyes.

    And the moment I held her
    and looked into her heart
    I felt my love surrender
    I knew it from the start.


    There must be an angel like you
    who glows in such perfection
    who's face is so fair
    with a beautiful complexion

    But an angel couldn't ever
    replace what you are
    falling deep into forever
    because you're my shining star.

    4. Your love keeps me breathing



    [Verse 1:]
    Baby I couldn't fall asleep, my thoughts started to wander
    I almost had to weep, but then I thought to yonder
    way over there, where you are, is not here,
    or there, but it's somewhere, and there is where
    I wish I could be. However we both know
    that ain't happenin, for now I'll just keep
    rappin it, cause the thought of you
    takes half my wits to not lose my mind.
    I'm passed bein resigned, I've already confined
    to half of all mankind. The world knows I love you, baby,
    and maybe one day we'll be together;
    but that day is not today, but it ain't far away. I'll just hope
    and dream until the day when we'll be face to face and I can say

    [Chorus]
    Your love keeps me breathin,
    when my heart stops beatin,
    You know nothin else, babe,
    Nothin else could ever keep me,
    standin on my two feet, yeahh, yeahh,
    Your love keeps me breathin.

    [Verse 2:]
    When this shit comes to my head, there'r times I wish that I was dead.
    Yeah thats what I just said, but I dread like a thread you'd follow suit,
    that is something that just would not shoot. But I know you're too cute,
    so I kick through. Yo dawg it's gonna be okay just chill. Nawh I can't
    be still, until I've got her in my arms once more, my hearts still sore.
    But you know you take my breath away, your my meth, and that's why
    I will not let death take me away, even on the worst day, the worst standards,
    when nothin goes the way it should but hey, I've still got you.
    Once again I think of you, and it reminds me too, that –

    [Chorus]
    Your love keeps me breathin,
    when my heart stops beatin,
    You know nothin else, babe,
    Nothin else could ever keep me,
    standin on my two feet, yeahh, yeahh,
    Your love keeps me breathin.
     
  2. Lil Wayne sucks this is real rap!
     
  3. I'm gonna make a song too! Lol. Just need to record. It'll be recorded and uploaded soon tho... Hopefully..
     
  4. Nice! I hope to hear your rap! 
     
  5. Yeah. I'm going with something fast ish. Like, some parts fast, some regular.

    Like... Ummm..... Invincible by MGK.. something like that.
     
  6. Too long.. I can't read all this crap all whammed into a pile altogether.
     
  7. Love it dude

    I make rap songs too
     
  8. Shut up sweet that's so mean If u read it you would understand it duhh. U just don't like to read so sumtin der really good der amazing
     
  9. Dont listen to the haters bro i thought it was dope. Keep em up id like to see more from you
     
  10. Why does Ashley love him? I wanna be loved 