The Encounter

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by God_Is_My_Judge, Apr 12, 2012.

  1. A Oneshot... .___. First Time Writing... Do comment.Hope it is ok... It's a fictional story. Yea...
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    Chapter 1-The Encounter

    It was morning, the sun was high in the sky already, yet I still lay by the meadow. Ignoring everything in sight, I closed my eyes and listened to mother nature calling. The wind howling softly and the grass rustled as the wind pass through it. I am now relaxed. Taking out my pen and a piece of plain paper,I starting drawing. Drawing on the scales of the scenery on my map every single details was written carefully and nicely,since I was using a pen I can't afford to make any mistake as well.

    Suddenly, a constant stomping and growling sound interrupted this beautiful moment, as I was drawing the map and enjoying the moment,it started soft but now,I could hear it clearly. I knew I had heard it before... Yes,it must be Yodels. The Yodels, a race which have been extinct for a long time, until someone found a fossil of it and took its DNA for cloning. He took the data and sold it for alot of money.There was only two forces who had the power to manufacture the Yodels and in mass quantity too, they are the Demacia and Noxus. Of course there are still others which could clone them but buying the data of the Yodels is worth billions...

    The Demacia and Noxus have a eternal rivalry over this piece of land and I am here to scale out this land's structure and everything there is. As it is my job as a map drawer.

    I knew I gotta run... As I stood up and sprinted off,till a safe distance away before I stopped running.Then, I realized that my map drawing was not with me...I didn't need it but my client does.

    "Seriously?! Worst day of my life...!"

    As I made my way back to where I was, they were already fighting. The Demacian's Yodle were dressed in a blue robe with black embroidered crest while the Noxusian's Yodle were dressed in a purple robe with gold embroidered crest.It was a horrifying battlefield to witness...

    "DEMACIAAA!"a voice came from the back of the blue robe yodels.

    Chapter 2-The new beginning

    Suddenly, a ray of thin red light was shone throughout the battlefield and...BOOM. A burst of rainbow appeared! Killing of all the yodels both the blue and purple ones. It was probably some beam that looked like a rainbow.

    "Lux, my dear sister...You have to be careful of where you aim! You just killed our own army there!" a loud deep loud,which appeared to be scolding this girl named Lux.

    Lux... Ah! It had to be her. 'The Lady Of Luminous' a nickname given to her for her magic skills with light.
    Or ultimately... A light mage.

    Ah...that guy! It must be Garen! Lux's brother... Also a some others which I could not recall properly. I picked up my map and turned around wanting to go, when suddenly...

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  2. βωμψ or in other words bump
     
  3. Seems legit, Danny.
     
  4. Was it good? Anything I can improve on? Any comments are welcomed.
     
  5. Any comments...?
     
  6. You wrote a story Danny?!  Anyways, I personally liked it  It was confusing at first, but I liked it! 