Okay so seeming that mine and yours story (Gontier) died.. Im making a sequel thingy.. Lol. Feel free if you want to join in.. As a random character though. Donny is TOTALLY mine, but you can have Allison this time. Lol. Okay, so, here goes Donny's P.O.V DAMNIT I'm desperate for her. I cannot help but glare at her simple beauty. I ride past her house everyday on my bike. Too bad she's married. I must admit, George was an amazing guy, he just wasn't right for her. I mean, I'm perfect for her. We even look cute! Why can't she love me back? I could have soft kissable lips too, I mean I'm just trying here. Sigh. Nobody likes me. I AM SUCH A FIFTH WHEEL. All of my best friends are dating my other best friends. Alli and George... It's like a motorcycle and I'm that little thing on the side. Can I even help but frown in my self pity? NO I CANNOT. She's in the future, man! She's moved on! WHY CAN'T I LISTEN TO MYSELF? ---- Little taste.. Mhmm
Juliet's P.O.V Boy, how I loved Donny. The most wonderful boy here in willows town. I love love love love him so much! He just doesn't know I exist, at the moment. ---*later that day at college*--- "Oh em gee Jules," Katherina whispered. "It's Donny." My eyes shot open to the door. My hand flew in the air, sending a wave of papers 2 rows down. "EXCUSE ME MR. ROSE, NOT TO INTERRUPT BUT I HAVE TO USE THE REST ROOM." I stood up. People glared at me with smirks. "Total face palm.." I heard a boy with the brown (JB) hair smirk about two seats away say. I glared at him. "Go." Mr. Rose disappointedly murmured. I stumbled down and sprinted to the door, running behind Donny. "Hey.." I panted. "Hi?" Donny's lips were SOOOOOOOOOO cute. "Want a piece of gum?"I said hopefully. He put his hand up like a stop sign, shook his head disgusted and walked away. Love hurts...
Unlike others, I don't like bump nor do I know what it means so even though I (think) appreciate the bumping, why not criticize or say something longer then 2 words :3
Hey Pie, could you preferably make the updates longer, with longer paragraphs? The short paragraphs make the reader bored because one thought is finished too quickly. That is all.
Update time ^3^ Donny's P.O.V Grr. Not Juliet again. She is SOOOO annoying. All she does is bug me, like I can't get any space. She's not even attractive, personality wise or physical. She's just a boring, dumb, cracker. I dismissively shot down her offer of gum, shaking my head. She is too annoying for me to even think about being her friend. I seriously hate her guts. I cannot wait until next semester when I transfer to yale. Community college just isn't good enough. I wish Allison would've gone to college. I wish Allison wouldn't have ever gotten married. Like, 17 is FAR to young to be married. When she dropped out of high school after her 17th birthday and her and George ran away, I thought she was dead. She changed her phone number and everything. It was after she had lost her vision, and she was completely in shock. Like she didn't even know me. What had I done? Sometimes I wish that she would've just given me a chance, instead of the conceited slobs like Ezio or Jordan. They never really cared for her, only I did. I'll bet every last dollar I have that George only wanted her for her Poppy's money, or her looks. She is so beautiful! "Bbbzzzzzzzz." My phone vibrated in my pocket. "Sup man." The text read. "Hey." I replied instantly. "Sssuuuppppp XP." "Ntmu? Takin a nudder course." "Coolio. Wanna hang 2nite?" "Sure." -----
So, even though this may be a sequel to the day your grandparents met, but there are lots of new characters. I will name them from top to bottom (mains to random characters) Donny Juliet Mitchell Dana Crusty (Nickname for Cristy) Allison Damian George Ezio Smartie (Nickname for Maria) This is as of the next few chapters. Enjoy.. <3
This is your time to shine Gontier just remember Donny is mine Juliet's P.O.V Snip. Snap. *1 hour later* Pink hair? Scene style? Lip piercing? 4 lares of eye liner? I was new. BRAND NEW BABY. And sexy. I was SURE Donny will love me now. I think he likes sexy scene girls. I am so desperate for him, I'll do anything. Even loose weight. Gain pounds. Eat more. Talk less. I'll do anything, for my true love. Even if he doesn't know that we're meant to be.. Yet. "DO YOU BELIIIIIEEEEVEEE IN LOVEE?" My big sister screeched from the shower. "Really?" I yelled back. 'No.....' I wanted to think. --- Sorry! Gtg!