There will only be a few povs mostly there will be encounters and conversations. I hope you enjoy! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1 Lana's P.O.V I walked into the hospital slowly, only because I knew this day would change my life forever. I was greeted by the chief of surgery, Dr. David Quincy. He asked me my name and I stuttered out Lana Adiagi. I felt like an idiot but all he did was smile warmly and told me that things would work out for me. I'm sure they would I hope they would. I walked off and picked up my uniform light blue scrubs with a short doctors jacket. I had just dyed my hair back to black the other night. I had sky blue hair before and before that a nice fuscia color. Well atleast I still have my flippy "rebel" hairstyle. Most of the women tied up their hair but I didn't have to so yay for short hair. I walked out and waited to be called so I could meet my resident and then he walked by.....
I told Chloe I would work more on my feedback skills so~ Use commas so there's no run-on sentences. :3 other than that, it's a good story.
Use paragraphs mah Kitkat it makes it look longer than it is and saves people going "Oh that was a short update -.-" xD
Thank you guys for reading and for the feedback. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lana's P.O.V He walked by, the chief walked by and I felt like something just wasn't right. I mean he looked at me a way a father would and I gasped. He was the man my mother had an affair with!!! He ripped apart my childhood he was a basta- there assigning interns to residents.... They were assigning for Dr. Alexander Fitch, He called out Stevens, Johnston, Walker, and Pierce. I was somewhat nervous, what if my resident is a cocky dirtbag. Now announcing Dr. Miranda Bailey Adiagi, Morton, Grey, and Yang I was so relieved she looks sweet and short. Someone whispered to me "Ooh tough break your assigned to the nazi". Now I'm on edge she must be awful....
Bump. Make sure to be more descriptive on how exactly this and that happened. It's a good story, otherwise.
Flashback I was sitting on a carisol horse, with my short hair tied in pigtails. My mother and the chief were standing right at the exit line. Then the ride started all the pretty rainbow lights and the spinning. I called out for my mother to look but she was fighting with Dr. Quincy. They weren't even paying attention to me. Finally they were screaming at each other I only made out a few words "....divorce.......anna.....elope....happy...." When the ride ended my mother was sitting on a bench alone, crying. She finally took me home and told me to go to bed. I was so upset and then dad came home... End of Flashback