OMG Persephone!!!  Holy cheese crackers! I love their relationship! It's so SEDUCTIVE but then it's all mad and sad... Totally bipolar or maybe it was that time... 
          PEESEPHONE AND IAN!!!  Sorry but I LOVE this story! TOTAL SPAM... 
This is amazing. Very detailed, very descriptive, and has many different elements of genre. This story could only get better if you somehow miraculously found a way to make it better. That is how perfect it is.