I can't let u go.... part one: Michelle: " I can't let you go babe please don't leave me like this." I said to Rick with tears running down my face my eyes blood shot and my heart racing. "Michelle get off of me." he hissed coldly with no emotion, as he turned his back towards me and started heading out the door. I grabbed his arm hoping that he would forgive me for all the pain that I've put him thru, I know I was wrong but I loved him and I couldn't let him just walk out of my life. Not like this not ever. I never cheated on him I'm always there for him when he needs me, why can't he just except my faults?! I'm human after all and we all make mistakes. This is the story of my life I never seem to end up with the right guy and if I do I always end up chasing them away thru my own negligence. Hey guys it's been a while since I've written, but here goes nothing bump of you like it. Thanks again, Mia
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Rick: I left her standing there in tears. I knew it wasn't over I knew I loved her but I had to get away and think for a while. I got into my car and headed to the only place I knew that would help me clear my head. I drove my car in silence until I reached my destination. The big building that looked over the whole city of Los Angeles, CA. Once I arrived I got out of my car and hit the alarm, then I took the stairs up to the very top of the building and sat on the rooftop. It was so beautiful up there. You could see all the lights from the buildings of Los Angeles and the beautiful nights sky. I started thinking about my relationship with Michelle. Yes she was always there for me, yes she's never cheated but, what she was doing to herself hurt me way worse then anything else. I hated when she drank, I couldn't stand it don't get me wrong I drink but nothing like her. She turned into a whole different person when she drank and that wasn't something that I wanted to be apart of. I wanted for us to go back to the way things were when we met. That was the girl that I fell in love with, not some sloppy drunk that can barely get herself up the stairs. My father taught me to never let a women see you cry which is another reason I had to leave her there for a while. My heart was broken and I couldn't figure out a way to mend the pain. It was like someone was stabbing me over and over and I felt every slice. Thanks for the bumps . also Thank you violet for the tips ii will work on it. for now enjoy!