Hurt

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by BreeTanner135, Dec 30, 2011.

  1. Update the thing already... Im like drooling, this is amazing! 
     
  2. Ok ok calm down I'm writing it now;3
     
  3. It'll be up by noon US eastern standard time;)
     
  4. Bump! I just read the whole story! I love it!
     
  5. Thank you all ily guys!!! Here's the next chapter

    A very drunk Anne staggered over and started babbling.
    "Shhhh-eeee Reny? You dooooo like Tomazz! Youra filthy little skank you eeeer..." she continued to say incomprehensible babble until Tom had fully escorted to her room.
    Now Mark was back at my side with a large cake encouraging me to cut it while he took all the beer away from here. So I did and about ten minutes later Tom finally reappeared.
    "There you are! What took so long." I said straightening his collar. The look on his face when I first saw him was a little wild but as I straightened him up his eye looked like his body just act to be with me near me...
    With a sigh he explained with two words, 'attempted rape' I busted out laughing and handed him a slice of the cake Anne had arranged.
    Erika cane up to me with Bryan and 3 other of my senior friends, "Dude this party is crazy, awesome but we're gunna head out before the cops come and the designated drive gets drunk... Or someone gets knocked up-" a moment of silence followed to listen around the crowd and music. There it was a banging and moans laughter flowed through the group as I got individual goodbyes and Happy-sweet-16!!'s.
    The crowd had migrated out to the pool, I watch helplessly as kid after kid dived into that pool. Quickly Mark regained my attention by wrapping his arms around me. I spun around to face him looking at his gorgeous face. Only I couldn't focus on him, over his shoulder I saw a group of girls using a column holding up the stairs as a dancing pull, another doing strip teases. I went to go stop them but he pulled me back and caught my attention again before I noticed some people throwing around ice and water, I didn't want to know what they were doing to that plant, some was making a hanging-man's knot but Tom went and stopped them.
    When he did this I realized they were trying to let me have a good time. I looked up at Mark who was smiling softly- he looked like an angel.
    "Thanks..."
    "Hey it's your party you should be having fun, I'm just glad I can help." then he pulled me into a tight hug. A moment later everything was much more calm and he held me at his side. Tom came over and kissed my forehead.
    "Having a good time?" his face was brightly lit with a smile, he was so silly sometimes, he look like a little boy. With a sigh then a smile I replied.
    "Yeah , this is great thank you guys!" and I pulled them each into a hug. Then a commotion drew our attention to the pool, a discoherent chant. I recognized the words quickly...
    Jump!Jump!Jump!
    They were all looking at the roof.
     
  6. Sorry for any mistakes I didnt proof read that one
     
  7. Holy jeezo. Bump!!
     
  8. UPDATE! NOW! :3 hehe Bump
     
  9. One moar bump and I'm a happy camper :3
     
  10. BUMP. i think it counts.
    PLLEEEEAAASSSEE UPDATE?! I might die..
     
  11. Okey fine since ur life is on the line gimme a lil bit:3 itll be up bye at latest tomorrow
     
  12. Sorry I didn't update I had a bunch to do!!! Happy Easter btw I love all you guys!!!
    Next chapter just for
    -Angel_Cuppcake_97-  hope you didn't die

    I remember watching a documentary once on heroes, one person's story in particular I remember. A man had seen a large sign falling towards a small girl he was describing what he felt. He had said he didn't really mean to but that's what he did in a split-life-or-death decision. He said it took a lot of courage, if he hadn't been so brave he didn't think his mind would have reacted that way. He also described it as though he was watching a movie, he was sitting safety watching from his couch while a heroic man saved her, he didn't realize it was him.
    That's how I felt. Even though I didn't know who it was, even though it could be someone I hate, even though I could injure myself, even though I hate humanity at this point I still felt the need to save a life that was in it's prime. Although two of the bravest strongest people I have ever met stood next to me I was the one to move.
    I was there quickly hands extended, I knew I'd be to weak to catch her but I could cushion her into the pool. Yes it was a she. Rebecca.
    She was average- a little chunky- nothing remarkable. Her dull limp brown shoulder length wavy hair matched her flat eyes. Her skin was pale and unhealthy and her cheeks always red from a skin condition. I had talked to her before she was nice, didn't have to many talents. I guess not too many people would've cared if she died, I was positive she would remember me saving her or even the fact the I was saving her. Everyone was drunk but I didn't want recognition just wanted to save her.
    It took about five seconds and her weight crushed down on me, but I managed to use her momentum to fling her-and me- into the pool. Some people moan and said I ruined the splashed but I ignored them as I thrashed to the surface gasping for air.
    In the water my dress began to fall apart, I couldn't get out alone the water weighed me down. Rebecca splashed me and cursed at me for ruining her moment, I didn't care I just wanted out.
    "Party's over you can leave." Tom's voice boom as Mark helped me out. The crowd silenced quickly because they knew not to screw with Tom. Tom naturally had a commanding voice it was deep and authoritative, it pissed me off when he used it, like he's the boss. Only this time I was happy for it, a few people obeyed and rushed away but the crowd only disappeared when Mark-who's voice is generally sweet and gentle- order every one to leave. Now. Id heard him use that voice once before, we had gotten into a minor fight and I said something that really got him mad. It scarred me at first but then the anger won over, I punched him hard, made him bleed... I felt bad and tears welled up, that was the day I told him about my family.
    The crowd was gone I was wet and a mess. I just wanted to be alone.
    "You ok?" Mark asked as the last car drove away.
    "Yeah, yeah I'm fine, just going to go upstairs grab my stuff and change, if you want you can go home."
    This time Tom spoke, "You want us to stay?" I could tell he was making an effort to acknowledge Mark by the way he said us.
    "I wouldn't mind." and I ran up stairs.
    I have a feeling it wasn't a good idea to leave them down their alone. Or me going up here alone.
     
  13. Wouldn't remember me saving her* I forgot to proof read again>.<