Remember the Promise

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *XxEatMyHeartxX (01), Mar 25, 2011.

  1. o_O suspense
     
  2. Haha not really I just get lazy 
     
  3. But I'm going to be leaving for a hotel soon 
     
  4. IDC MORE!!!!!! I is hungry for more.......
     
  5. The world is a haze. I can't tell if my eyes are open or not, and either way I can't see. All I can here is ringing. I feel steady pressure pushing down over and over on my chest until I roll over coughing. The coughing burns. I turn back around panting as my eyes slowly come back into focus. That's when I see them. Those eyes... Deep brown eyes so dark they almost look brown. With specs of gold around the outside. I feel dizzy, but not from the cold anymore...
    "What the HELL where you thinking?!" my euphoria is shattered by his anger.
     
  6. Murrr Danzo lol I'm with my fwiends
     
  7. Deep Brown eyes that almost look brown?

    But anyways I love it and my part is way awesome.

     
  8. Oh man I ment black lol I'm hanging with my friends at a hotel not really paying attention
     
  9. Say I said hi to your friends.
     
  10. Yeah tell them I said hi too
     
  11. Me too! Tell them a random stranger said yo. MORE
     
  12. Even when infuriated his eyes were warm and inviting... "I I'm sorry there was a man and... I didn't try to..." I can't seem to get the words right... In his arms I just feel weak. "no, what you WEREN'T doing was thinking." he says, shaking his head angrily. The shock of the incident begins to wear and the cold sinks in. I'm shaking, my teeth chattering I could hardly reply if I wanted to. He sighs and removes my dripping coat, replacing it with his. "you're lucky I was here... Next time you want to take a little swim, at least choose a place with others around..." His coat is warm... I feel safe with him. "Oh...k-kay," I manage to mumble. "Now... I don't want you walking like this... And the boys back in the ER would kill me for calling an ambulance for this on such a busy day..." he looks around. "Where do you live exactly?" It takes all my energy to answer, "Juanita Village..." He shakes his head again. I feel guilty, I barely knew him yet I couldn't stand upsetting him. "that's a completely different sub-district... There's no way you can get that far in those wet clothes... You will freeze to death!" he shakes is head yet again, but stands and offers his hand. It takes a while, but I'm able to stand up with his support. "Look, I live just down this road, you can come in and take a hot shower while I dry your clothes.." his face turns bright red. "oh wow... I'm sorry I sound like a perv don't I?" he reaches into his pocket and pulls out an ID card.
     
  13. My friend really likes your name stewie. She is a Harry Potter freak 
     
  14. MORE hehe I'm hungry for more
     
  15. I just posted some lol. What do you want your last name to be?
     
  16. Umm hmmm idk u make it up for me
     
  17. awesome heart i wunt to b in it
    pwease?
    name:Hill
    desc: he is inteligent. He likes to help his people,
    he is a specialist with bombs, computers and any electrical devises
    aperiance: black hair: mojawck
    body:muscular=sixpack