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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Allison_DiLaurentis (01), Mar 29, 2012.

  1. "Haley!"

    "Haley!"

    "Jesus Christ on a bike Haley! Wake your butt up!!"

    "mmmhhmmmm. WHAT!?" I demanded

    I looked over and saw Beth standing over me
    "what time Is it?" I groaned
    "seven thirty. Time to wake up and start getting ready. Competition day. Get your tons of make up on and help me with my tons!!" Beth demanded dragging me out of bed.

    "where's Quinn?"

    "she snuck out last night to go to Ryan's dorm. Never came back. I texted her this morning and she said she fell asleep with Ryan and will go to watch us compete. "

    "oh." I said. Barely able to comprehend what she was saying. It was too early for this.

    Let me just give you some back ground information.

    I'm sixteen. My name is Haley Kendayll McGee. I cheer competitively for TEXAS SHOWDOWN PRODIGY And I go to Texas Prepatory Academy. I have long brown hair that goes to my mid back. Big blue eyes I'm tallish. about 5'6 so I'm pretty normal looking. I share a dorm with my two amazing best friends Beth and Quinn. Beth and I cheer. And Quinn plays softball. I have a boyfriend named Zach who plays baseball here at TPA.






    SOOO do we like
     
  2. We like.  FIRST! 
     
  3. NO FAIR IM TRYING TO PUBLICIZE!!!!!
     
  4. I love you both!!

     
  5. Flubber: 
    Alison: Aww, 
     
  6. Hey! Play nice now. Flubbed is my AMAZING publicist!! Go check out the favorite names for girls if u wanna be one too:)

     
  7. Head publicist
     
  8. Yess he's my head publicist. All interested. Must speak with him
    @flubberj

     
  9. Next update:
    TOMORROW NIGHT ABOUT SAME TIME AS TONIGHT

    Dedication for this chapter: Flubberj
    My amazing publicist for telling people about this story. ROLL TIDE

     you all!!
     
  10. Thanks!!
    Off to bed now my lovelies. Thank you for being the first ones to read this. Love you all I'll be back tomorrow. Same time!

     
  11. Bye :) see ya tomorrow
     
  12. Pre good
     
  13. I like it!
    It's good!

    Try to paint a picture for us, like

    I have long, silky brown hair that flows down to my mid back.

    Or something of that use. Just use your senses and make us feel what you feel:)
    Sorry, I rush read, it's midnight here.
     
  14. Ohh And in the next update you should describe Zack, Quinn, and Beth to us:)
     
  15. I do not like it at all. I love it!!!!!
     
  16. I like! 