The way of war

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mekhi, Mar 20, 2012.

  1. Hello everyone  this is the first fanfic I ever done. I decided to give it a try. It's just something I quickly thought about. It could become more I guess .

    A valley known as "deaths way" where countless battles and bloodshed took place, stood two warriors with cold emotionless looks in their eyes.
    Countless bodies scattered around everywhere lay dead. The scent of blood was high in the air.
    Both stood at the opposite side of the valley from each other.
    Hands on there hilt of there swords, they dash and quickly unsheathe there sword. The sound of metal hitting metal was heard throughout the valley.
    If someone were watching the battle, it would appear as the two were blurring in and out clashing against each others swords. Just one mistake and one or the other can lose their life.
    This was the way of war.


    So uh let me know what you think  sorry for it being so short  and I didn't want to try and attempt a battle scene because it would be crap.
     
  2.  you should write more cos I've got a feeling it could turn out super duper good  so talented you !
     
  3. Neh  I'm having second thoughts... I wasn't made to be a writer 
     
  4. Flubber... Capital tsuki sent you here I know it 
     
  5. noo  I've never talked to flubber before ...