Michael ran after the nerd who was running away. The nerd ran faster than Michael but Michael was catching up to him. Michael soon remembered what had happened to him before. All Michael could heat and see now was him running away from Darry. Michael felt the pain he was given that day and now feels it again because he is just another Darry. Michael not paying attention, tripped and the nerd got away. Michael got up and walked home. He went to the basement and lied down on his bed. He saw the scar he had from two years ago. He wasn't going to cut himself again. He wasn't harming himself in any way, yet. The next day, Michael walked to school and saw the nerd he chased yesterday. He tried to apologize but the nerd just ran away. Michael angry, went inside the school and dropped out of school. He took all his belongings out of his locker and left the school. He went to the supermarket to apply for a job and bought snacks. He went home and ate all the food,then just fell asleep. ---------- It's short sorry!
I need someone to help me with Updates. I am going to create another soon and I won't have time to update both. So I need a partner who will help with the story , what should happen next , etc. They will take credit from where they started and I will be grateful. That person will: •Update the story when I can't. •Help write the conflict. •Introduce any new characters (If any) •Help me write the next Update basically. •Help get ideas. Thanks!
Ok Follow me and think of ideas for the next idea I will help too. Then after we think of ideas let's chat tomorrow about it. Than if you want you can post it but you don't have to.
Good Job! Just something you should do more is combine sentences. And occasionally have it seem like the story is watching the main character, instead of BEING the main character.