constricken pt. 1

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by BADASS_CHASSITY_BELT, Mar 25, 2011.

  1. "flash" I wake up and all I see is white just pure whit as my eyes try to focus on what is in front of me. While I am trying to see I can feel that my arms and legs are restrained by some sort of material I think it is leather? But I'm not sure. My eyes then are able to focus on what is ahead of me it is a movie screen with an old projector shining it beam onto it. I look to my arms and legs to notice that they are restrained and I can't break loose. That is when the screen flashed and caught my attention. I was looking at the images flashing on the screen trying to pick out all I can. Airplanes thousands just falling from the sky, babies dying from a flesh eating virus, people burning on the streets, entire continents loosing power, the sun setting out flares that reach the earth what could this mean?? But before I knew it, a man thin like a skeleton wearing a white suit and tie grabbed my chair wheeling me away saying I've already seen enough. Then the flash came and I was blind again.
     
  2. So should I write a part 2?
     
  3. It's good. Try slowing it down a little in part two.