Hunger Games. my version

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *RoseScarlett (01), Feb 27, 2012.

  1. Wall fir an update!!!!! It's good
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  2. Update:

    I close my eyes.

    "Alex....or Logan?" my mind says.

    The door opens and closes. I open my eyes and see

    "M-Mrs. Aly?!"
    Logans mom. She loved me, thought I was the one for Logan when we dated.

    "Hi Rose." she smiles and holds my hands.

    "I won't be the one to kill your son." my hands tremble. I wanted him dead at the reaping, but now? I dont, I want him to live.

    She sighs. "I know baby doll."
    "I wont watch him die either."
    She smiles and places a hand on my cheek. "You know I love you right?"
    I nod and smile. "Of course I do."

    I stare into her green eyes, and see Logan. Logan...he looked a lot like his mother, but was by his fathers side all the time. After the war, the districts visited each other a lot. Logans mom came over when she was twenty-one, met Mr. Aly, and married him. Less then a year later, Logan was born. Now Mrs. Ally is thirty- seven years old.

    "Baby doll you're the best" she whispers and kisses my forehead, then hugs me.

    "I won't let him die. He'll come home" I whisper sadly.

    "Rose, don't let me stop you for wanting what you want most"
    "Never."
    "Never ever?"
    I grin "No."
    She smiles. "That's my girl. Tough as a rock yet beautiful.."
    "As a rose." I finish and hugs her tightly.

    "Good Luck. May the odds be ever in your favor Ms. Rose."

    The guard walks in.
    "Times up! Rose it's time" he says.

    "Well, you're going to win." she kisses my forehead one last time and walks out.

    I sigh and stand up. I must board the train. I have to face Logan....
     
  3. Hmmm... What about FLIP? WHAT THE ZIP?! AWESOME SAUCE!
     
  4. Lol very good story Rose!
     
  5. Update:

    A tear rolls down my cheek as I stand up.

    "Okay," I whisper and take the guards arm.

    "It'll be okay." he says, with no emotion. He walks me out and everyones there. Alex stares at me with a sad face, seeing that I don't have the roses. I quickly look down, I can't look at him. One more second of looking at him and my heart will break into a million pieces.

    "COME HOME ROSE!" everyone yells. I blush.

    "You know, blushing isn't going to get you anywhere."

    I gasp and turn around quickly, and see Logan. Hes grinning slyly. I shake m head.

    "Weird." I say. I look at everyone again, and they're smiling sweetly. I smile back, and place my index and
    Middle finger against my lips, then lift them up, towards the sky. I remember the teachers telling us my mother did this when she volunteered. A sign of respect, and I respect my district. Everyone replies with the same sign, and I turn around and inhale deeply.

    The train pulls up, more like a speed train, I think you can get to the capital in one day. I'm not sure about times anymore. The door opens and my dad appears beside me.

    "You know you'll never come out alive." he states.

    I nod."I know, and neither will you." I grin.

    Logan grabs my wrist. "Lets go."
    "Okay, but I call the best room."
    He laughs and guides me to the steps. I smile and look at his hair, which flutters in the wind.

    "Your hairs messing up..." I move his hair aside.

    He grins "I know."

    I blush slightly and go up the steps.
    "Cmon Logan, can't keep the capital waiting for long." I lead him up the steps, and he flashes his white teeth at me again.

    "Cmon lover boy." I joke.

    "Hold your horses lover gal." he responds, laughing.

    "Oh cut it out you two." my father says, annoyed. I roll my eyes.

    "Dad don't be mad just cause you know your daughters going to return home." I say, walking into the first room. The doors close after everyones in, including Hanna.

    "Rose and Logan, your room is over there." she gushes.

    My father chokes on air. "Room?!?!"
    "There's not enough room on the train for separate rooms. You should know that"
    "No, I refuse-"

    I interupt. "Dad, shut up. Haven't you done enough damage already?" I walk off into the hallway, which is furnished with gold and red paint, filled with pictures of the previous tributes during the interview. The light brown carpet felt good against my feet.

    At the end of the Hallway are two doors. I peek into one, which has been filled with piants. My dads, I'm guessing. I close the door and open the other, which has two twin beds and a huge closet that takes up half a wall. Our room i guess...this is going to be a long day and night.
     
  6. I am so sorry to say this and I'm not trying to be mean but I hate it with all my heart! First off, Katniss would never EVER leave Peeta in a thousand years, secondly, The Hunger Games had ended when Katniss killed Coin, remember, thirdly District 12 never had the fence again, it was torn down when the bombing started in Catching Fire, fourthly Katniss told Peeta that she loved him for real, fifthly Gale and Peeta knew that Katniss would choose the one she could NOT survive without, and lastly, Katniss and Peeta were meant to be and you know that so please dont tear them apart like this! I don't mean to be a hater but you have to follow the books!!!! Or it's just not right
     
  7. *shrug* oh well. Your opinion. I know all this stuff, I was just trying to make it interesting
     
  8. I KNOW this stuff, trust me. I almost didn't right this story cuz of the many flaws, but I did. I'm grateful that I did, because there are many people who enjoy it. I know you're being honest, and I respect that
     
  9. Dont be hating start apreciating 