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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *RoseScarlett (01), Mar 12, 2012.
Rose: -watches- need help?
Juliette: *Thinks to herself, shutting her eyes*
Zack-no.... -keeps building and in a hour i made a perfect shelter-
Rose: -bites lip and looks at wound-
Zack-looks at your wound and sighs- Sorry......
Rose: -sighs- it's okay, its my fault..
Zack-no its my fault sorry.......
Rose: -shrugs- what's done is done
Zack-smiles a bit but hides it- Yea.....
Rose: -catches your smile-
Zack-hides my face in the hood- Ill go get food....
Rose: -bites lip again- you sure you don't need help?
Zack-im ok!! -walks of with bow-
Rose: -cringes back then sits on ground, trying to figure you out-
Zack-goes out an comes bak with a bag full of rabbits- Dinner is here....
Rose: -smiles- thanks..need help skinning them?
Zack-nah.....but you can start the fire....
Rose: -nods and stands up and makes branches fall, then picks them up and makes a fire pit-
Zack-skins them easily and finishes- Is the fire ready...?
Rose: -takes out flint and starts fire- there