Paradise Lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by aritzia, Mar 17, 2012.

  1. Hey!
    This is my first ever story so please give comments to help me improve!
    No hater pls...if u don't like it, simply just don't comment

    Here goes nothing!
    It will get better once I get into the story!...hopefully


    What more could you ask for? Spring break trip to Jamaica with your friends to blow off steam from our senior year, gorgeous beaches and resorts, not to mention the hotties there. Believe me, if life was this good, I'd jump of a cliff screaming how good it is. Not exactly the smartest thing to do but hey, I was to excited to come up with anything better. Of coarse, when I thought of it, I didn't actually mean it literally. Now, I take back everything I said. Wanna know why? Find out for yourselves.
     
  2. Will Tanner's P. O. V.
    "William Tanner, your the best guy ever...I..I think I love you" she looked at the ground shyly. I was shocked. She finally admitted her feelings for me, and what could be better in Jamaica.I stared back dreamily and smiled. As I opened my mouth to speak....

    "Dude! Wake up, or we'll be late meeting the girls" James panicked. " I swear I set the alarm to 6am but it's 7:10 now" he said frantically.

    I opened one eye lazily. "James calm down!" I laughed. We're meeting them at the airport at 10:30."

    James looked at me sheepishly. "Got the times mixed up. Sorry, go back to sleep. I'll set the alarm to eight" he looked apologetically.
    James went out and shut the door.

    I tried going back to sleep but James interrupted me earlier. I groaned. I thought about my dream earlier. "Just a dream" I whispered sadly....