A connection too strong to break

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ANIME-QUEEN (01), Mar 2, 2012.

  1. Please violet? I really want to get ur POV on here
     
  2. Btw I experimented with ima monster and made a story similar to it. If u read it please comment on it and tell me if u like it. The story is called:
    Mental_Love_Story
     
  3. >:D Fine. >:3 And I knew that was a familiar background...
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    Angelina
    I peeked out of the side of the door to see carter and Colin harassing some other wolves.
    I peeked out a little more to see Jimmy and....a-and Tanner......
    TANNER?!
    I whimpered softly and held my stomach as I fell to the floor. I shook my head no... Over and over....
    "Angelina?" Jay said, kneeling down next to me. I need to vomit. "What's wrong?"
    "J-Jimmy and T-T-" I couldn't finish my sentence.
    "And who?"
    I burst into tears crying, hitting my Godamn fist into the wall.
    I heard steps run towards where we were and I stood up.
    "Angelina sweetheart, what's wrong?"
    Oh, I'll tell him what's wrong. **
    "WHAT'S WRONG? WHAT'S WRONG?!" I screamed. "YOU'RE HARASSING JAY'S EX!" I screamed, dealing with Colin first. Then I pointed an accusing finger at Carter. "AND YOU LAY OFF OF BON QUI QUI! FOR
    BEING A MAN WHORE, GO HANG OUT WITH TRISHA!" I barked, grabbing Tanner and I cried, leaning into him.
    "Bon Qui Qui?" Jay and Carter asked, confused.
    Tanned turned a dark shade of red and hugged me, whispering,"It's okay...Shh....."
    Carter was ashamed, I could tell by the feelings in the air. Jay was feeling awkward and trying to deal with the 'Bon qui qui' part of it first.
    "T-Tanner...." I cried.
    "Shhh Amanda....."
    "AMANDA?" Jay asked.
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    Aight Chay, don't go all 'wtf' on me. :3 I have a plan
     
  4. Angie u do know that tanner is ur ex and carter is the one who marke u right?
     
  5. >:D Correct. But tanner was what we like to call in my house,Best friend.
     
  6. Jays POV

    Even though the whole "Bon qui qui" thing kinda creeped me out like A LOT. I had other anger I had to deal with a.k.a my boyfriend and my extremely annoying ex. I decided to deal with jimmy first. I grabbed his arm and dragged him out of the house and slammed the door shut. I immediately started yelling and screaming at him. I came back inside by myself filled with rage and anger I pulled Colin upstairs to tell him off as well.
     
  7. Bon qui qui Ah I love that kid
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    Angelina
    Alright, I still have to deal with talking to Jay about the whole 'Bon Qui Qui' and Amanda thing, but I'm happy.
    Carter stomped outside and sulked meanwhile I was still hugging Tanner.
    "Amanda..." he said, grabbing my hand.
    "Tanner,Shhh..."
    He smiled, his Jade green eyes staring into my auburn eyes.
     
  8. Jays POV

    I ran downstairs with my bag and Angelina's bag and pulled her away from Tanner. "Come on Angelina it's time for us to go" I growled at tanner before I walked away and walked out with Colin, Angelina and Carter.





    Sorry short update I g2g to school
     
  9. Angelina
    I silently cried as we left, burying my face in my hands. I had missed my little Bon Qui Qui....
    Carter put a hand on my shoulder and I slapped him.
    "What the hell?!"
    "Man Whore!" I hissed at him.
    "Both of you shut up!" Jay growled.
     
  10. Bump Man,I like this story
     
  11. Jay
    I couldn't believe that Angelina just slapped him. I pulled her aside for a moment. I looked her straight in the eye, I knew something was wrong. "Angelina what's wrong? You're usually not like this." I could see tears starting to build up in her eyes.



    Sorry short update again
     
  12. Angelina
    "My fucking name isn't Angelina." I growled, folding my arms. "Nobody screws with Tanner, okay?"
     
  13. Jay

    "But that doesn't give u the right to smack carter! Why do u still care about him anyways when he cheated on u with Trisha?" *gasps in shock* ** "No!... You don't, still have feeling for him, do you?"
     
  14. Angelina
    "Yes, it is because of Trisha!" I growl then blush.
    ".....Tanner is my best friend." I scoffed, hiding my softy feelings for him.
    We've been friends forever. I've known Jay and Tanner for the same amount of time. I missed him so much, just hearing him calling me Amanda gave me nostalgia.
    I groaned, and my blush fainted from my face.
    "It does give me the right to slap him." I said.
     
  15. Jay

    I dropped her bag on the floor in front of her "if u really love him so much that you'd disobey father and the law then u can just start unpacking now." I walked out of the house and got into Colin's car.
     
  16. Angelina
    I scratched her, and snatched my bag.
    "I'm going, I didn't say anything about loving Bon Qui-Qui." I mumbled and started walking.
    Ugh....
     
  17. Jay

    I screamed in pain "OW! **** THAT HURT!" I covered my arm with paper towel to stop the bleeding and runs outside with my bag crying
     
  18. Angelina
    I wrote my name 'AMANDA' in big letters on my arm and plopped into a chair next to Tanner. I decided to visit him before I was never going to see him again.
    I put my head in his lap, staring up at him.
    "Amanda,I'm sorry..." he said, pulling small strands of my hair back.
    "I'm sorry...I've been kind of a bitch..." I said, poking his nose.
     
  19. Why do u guys write short updates
     
  20. >:D Because.
    The updates depend on the other person