'Chasing' Love <3

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *RachelRebel (01), Feb 28, 2012.

  1. SPAM HER WALL TELLING HER TO UPDATE!!!!! 
     
  2. Haha
    Sooo I left you guys hungry as an animal to figure out what happens next huh? Well let's find out on this extreme update.
    Rachels POV:

    It felt like my whole world stopped, my eyes grew tense with frustration and dissapointment as they slowly started to water, I looked down. Are you kidding me? No. No. He said he would be there, he has a date?! What about me?! What about-
    "gotcha" he said smilng "oh my god that was so good." he started to laugh. I paused for a second a realized what happened. Wow chase, really?
    I was relieved so much but I was kinda mad.
    "you jerk!" I smacked him in the arm. "dude I hate you."
    "ouch baby that hurt, come here" he said reaching out for me.
    "no" I rejected. He came towards me and hugged me, wrapping his arms around me.
    "chase don't scare me like that!" I said almost starting to cry.
    I guess he knew cuz he let me go for a second.
    "wait a minute...dollface are you crying?" he said studying my face. I looked away trying my best to hide the tears that might fall, it was too late, he came up to me and looked at my face and his jaw dropped when he saw a tear fall. "baby I'm sorry I didn't think you'd cry!" he said surprised.
    "I'm not" I said looking away as another tear dropped, I think that was the end of my tears. He looked a bit serious, he caressed my face and got real close to me, his mouth was only about like an inch away. He took his hand off and put one arm around my weist and his hand in mine again, I was kind of against the wall this time. He went to the side of my face.
    "aww you know I'll always be here for you. Of course I'm going, I didn't think you cared that much Rachel."
    I blushed. He was so close to me I could die. "your like my best friend chase of course I care." i said emotionally. he smiled, I let go of his hand and he moved it above my head on the wall. I looked down, putting my hands on his chest. My heart was beating so fast, I couldn't breathe, is this it? I wanted to kiss him so badly, but considering I never have done it before I didn't want it to suck. He caressed my face only last time. "feel better?" he whispered in my ear
    I nodded and layed my head on him as he wrapped his arms around me.
    "so 7:30?"
    "yeah, you better be there" I warned lightly
    he laughed "I will babycakes, cuz I know you want to see me tonight." he winked at me.
    "oh god chase, again with the names?"
    "what? It's cute haha" he said
    I smiled a bit. I had to see him tonight. This is it, the last time. 
     
  3. bump! HOLY COW! Update pleasen
     
  4. I'm in love with this story!(:)
    Bump!
     
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  6. Can you wall me when you update?:)
     
  7. BUMPPPP!UPDATE NOWWWWWW!!!!
     
  8. U-U-Update  lolz mkay let's do thiss

    Chases point of view:
    Finally I don't feel like crap, so I go to school and see my gorgeous goddess  cuz thats what she is. I looked around for her in the morning, well she wasn't anywhere she usually is...oh wait, she must be in the library, how cute.
    I walked in the entrance to the library, sure enough I saw her head down in a magazine. I sneaked up silently, my footsteps so Silent you could hear a paperclip drop, I got closer...and closer...
    She gasped softly as I put my hands under her head and lifted it up to my face. Beautiful Hazel eyes, soft faded pink lips, brown Lucious locks, her delightful fragrance, and her suprised smile. I was so happy to see her once again.
    "hey beautiful." I said a bit nervous
    "hi chase." she said, I love when she says my name.
    She got up and came towards me, and I caressed her face for a few seconds, then took my hand off her face and put it around her hips and my other hand in hers. Her soft cinnimon colored fingers were so delicate, I grasped them gently and stared in her eyes. She smiled as we got closer and tilted her head near my chest.
    "soo, I'll see you tonight.." she said perplexed.
    I couldn't help it I had to do it
    "yeah about that..." I let go of her "I can't go...I have a date."
    Her face darkened and got extremely dull, she stared off into whatever abyss was in her mind. It scared me, was she okay, oh god I better stop.
    "gotcha." I said sly. "wow that was good."
    I bet she was thinking "thank god." cuz I swear that's what her face showed.
    She hit me pretty hard, I hope she wasn't too upset.
    "dude I hate you." she said jokingly
    Awww so cute, I tried to hug her but she turned away.
    I hugged her, when she spoke I realized how odd she sounded...wait, seriously?
    "dollface, are you crying?" I said looking at her.
    "no" she said stubbornly as a tear dropped.
    Aww my poor girl was crying, I didn't think she would cry! I held her while she looked away again as another tear dropped. S*** she's crying, didn't mean to do that. Good thing I was kidding cuz if I wasn't she'd kill me.
    I wrapped my arm around get hips and clamped her hand in mine again and stared at her reassuringly as she sniffed.
    "hey." I said softly "I'm sorry, I didn't know you cared that much about me sweetheart." she blushed and said back quietly "of course I care chase, you're really important to me."
    I blinked. She really cares for me. My heart started beating like crazy, I felt like I was in heaven. After all, she was too good to be true. I gazed in her eyes then saw her staring at my lips. My face grew hot.
    "kiss her already, d***!" I thought.
    Oh man I want to, she's so attractive. We got closer and closer as my heart beat grew faster and louder.
    Although as usual I Flipped out for mo reason and whispered in her ear.
    "of course I'm going Rachel."
    Because I am, I wouldn't miss it for the world.
    She layed her head on my chest and I wrapped my arms around her. Wow, I've never felt like this before, she's got my heart. I feel like I'm high, so electric and exotic. I don't need drugs to feel like this. She's way better than that. 
     
  9. UPDATE!
    or I'm gonna die!
     
  10. Lol how r y'all likin it so far? ^_^