Shitty song I mafe after wasting three hours listening to my JPOP and EPOP playlist. -------- It's a dead end, where the river stops flowing— Put it bluntly, there's no direction, Can't go back and can't get out— You're stuck— With me—— Think of, the sins we've made— Reminsce on the days we've spent, together—— Together—— Slight, breeze— On our shoulders, so light and so warm— Don't you miss it, when we were younger— When the days seem to never end—— Wish it were here. Part of me was dragged with you, Never seeming to get through— Floating end- lessly— Coated with sour cream— Sugar sweet lies were made, To keep us from contemplat-ing— About, our lives— Is this how it ends? Stuck, on the other side, of reality— Our dreams, fade away— Like dried paint, stuck on the rotting canvas of our lives. Like a tooth, decay— Bittersweet in a way— You're the reason why I live, this shitty path I take.... If chances, were given away— I'd take the road with the raining days, so I could hold you tight, hold you close to me— Holding you close to me. Oblivious bliss with both of us, Tumbling down the stairs of fate. Bonds were made in a short lifetime, Connected by threads called destiny— Following, our, God forsaken dreams— Drifting, away— ----- If you want, I could record it and put it as a video on youtube. .-. But no. My voice sucks.
Honest criticism here. I absolutely love the concept. The lyrics are brilliant, except for a few where I could tell you were trying wholeheartedly to find a metaphor. Nonetheless, I love it.
I CAN SING FOR YOU. Except that my parents and grandparents NEVER let me reveal anything(including filming myself and uploading it online). T_T
I haven't editted it yet, Adam. ^w^;; Thanks. Japanese "robot" singers like VOCALOID sing songs where the lyrics are pretty... straightforward.