I Got Brave...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AdamGontier (01), Feb 16, 2012.

  1. I NEED OPINIONS. I'm thinking about ending the story pretty soon. I could make it longer, but not many people are reading so I need your all's input. If I end it, I will be making another story, and after that story ends, a sequel to this one. If I make this story longer, I will still be making a story after, but maybe not a sequel... So...?
     
  2. Longer im only coming on here to read a few stories and this is one of them
     
  3. Make it longer then make a sequel with their kids or something
     
  4. Ok, here's the plan then. I will make the story longer, and I will add a sequel to it after I get done with the story I'm going to make after this. The sequel will be about Wesley's kid. I will try to make it as good as possible. Speaking of all this, I need to update.
     
  5. I leaned towards Kristen, and gave her a light kiss. But, she pulled me in and gave a much longer kiss. It was like something I longed for but never knew it.

    Then all of the sudden, I remembered everything about Kristen, what I felt about her, her complexions, her ambitions, her secrets, our love. I was back to my old self, well, partly. I still had my newfound talent.

    "I remember." I said.

    "What!?" She asked surprised.

    "I remember, everything."

    "Oh my god!" She said before hugging me.

    I noticed something in her jean pocket when I was looking down...yes, exactly what you think, but she is my girlfriend. It had a black, leathery, look to it. I reached down and grabbed it with no sound, and she didn't notice.

    "I haft to go to the bathroom." I said.

    "Okay." She said.

    I went into the bathroom, and sat down on the toilet. I did not really haft to go, I just had to examine the wallet, I opened it, and examined it. It has the I.D. of a guy named Johnny.

    I searched it various compartments, and found some money. What intrigued me, was I found a condom, and a picture of Kristen in it. She was cheating on me.

    I barged out of the bathroom and immediately went up to Kristen, and held up the wallet.

    "Cheating on me?"

    "How did you-" I cut her off.

    "Answer me."

    "It is my brother, I swear! He came over and left his wallet on accident."

    "His last name would beg to differ!" I almost screamed.

    "FINE! You caught me! It was a one time thing, I swear!"

    "Get out." I said quietly.

    "What?" She asked surprised.

    "GET OUT!" I screamed.

    "But-" I cut her off again.

    "GET THE HELL OUT!" I screamed so angrily she jumped a bit.

    She walked out and slammed the door. Good riddance I thought. I didn't mean that did I? No, I couldn't. I didn't. It must be the depression that led her to do it.

    I walked out the door, and got in my car. I turned the key in the ignition, and drove to my destination. Abbey's house.

    What!? He didn't! He couldn't of! Find out what happens next! Bump!
     
  6. UPDATE!!!!!!!!! YOU LEFT US HANGING!!!!!!! And bump
     
  7. I totally left you hanging, and you'll find out why. Hahaha
     
  8. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. STOP HANGING PEOPLE IT'S MEAN!!!!!!!!!!! AND BARBARIC
     
  10. That made me laugh out loud! Hahahahaha
     
  11. Lol Adam I love you lol you are just awesome. Nice job lolz
     
  12. Love you too Holly. Lol Thanks.
     
  13. Too late for you to say it Flubber! Jk Thanks. Lmao
     
  14. Lol you're welcome 
     
  15. Adam update again or I'll spam your pm with 's
     
  16. You all really responded to this update. Loving it. Lol I'll update tomorrow.
     
  17. You can't leave me at that o.o Update please 