'Chasing' Love <3

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *RachelRebel (01), Feb 28, 2012.

  1. ... Loving the story...
     
  2. This is my favorite part! It touched me.. *tear, sniffle sniffle*

    BUMP! 
     
  3. Awwwwww bump
     
  4. Update  glad u guys like it lol ^^

    Chases POV: So I was about to walk out of the school from music practice with my jam session and I saw Rachel. I said hi and he reply was so...dull. It was way too abnormal, she's rarely quiet. I looked at her face which was glum, her eyes were watered up badly. I hugged her as she started to cry, I couldn't believe it, seeing a girl so amazing, so beautiful, so special to me cry. It killed me inside, I felt like I was stabbed. I hated this feeling...my heart was pierced...so much agony...then I got frustrated.
    "Who did this to you?!" I said agitated. I wanted to punch something. How could someone hurt this girl? She was so perfect!
    She told me what happened with Jessica at lunch. That *****....I can't believe she did that! Actually I can...she's so obsessed with me and she's so ridiculous. I don't know If she hurt Rachel because of me or whatever else, but she's gonna get it. I can't wait for karma...she hurt my girl..I refuse to let her get away with this.
    Rachel eventually stopped crying as I held her longer, I picked her up from the ground and she freaked a bit, so cute. I guess she was looking for her ride or something, anyways she sat on the floor and I walked over to her. I wrapped my arms around her and ran my thumb over her faded pink soft lips while caressing her face. I could smell her sweet fragrance...so attractive, her hazelish light brown eyes stared at me dazed. She's a godess, and I loved her. I loved her so much.
    I moved in closer as we were an inch away, I could feel her hands on my chest...she was very nervous...so was I (maybe not as much as her but you know..). I tilted my head slightly, going to the side of her cheek as she turned away.
    "I have to go." she mumbled silently.
    D***....I thought. I wanted to kiss her right then and there...why didn't I?! Oh well.
    She took her hands off my chest and picked up her backpack as she rose. She asked me about my jacket, I told her to keep it. Then I watched her walk off to get into her car.
    Wait...she seemed...a bit upset that she had to leave. Did she really want to stay...with me...in my arms?
    Hold up...Does Rachel like me?!
     
  5. So yeah ^^ update for you pplz:

    Rachels POV:
    Chase was sick today so i was kinda dull. But I still felt good that Jessica got Suspension For throwing her tray at me. She glared at me viciously as she was walked down to the office. I smiled with sarcasm as I waved to her then I turned and walked off.

    After school I got my backpack and saw my friends standing around.
    "hey guys" I said.
    "hey wanna stop by chases house and see how he's doing?" said Brooke.
    "what?" I said confused
    "cmon you know you wanna see your lover." Jordan teased
    "I don't know what your talking about!"
    I said defensively, "besides how would we get there? We can't drive."
    "hmm..." said Brooke.
    Jordan flipped out her cell "I got this" she said winking. She dialed a number and put her phone to her ear.
    "hey David! Uh think you can get us a ride to chases house?" she said
    "David?" I questioned her
    She kept talking. "okay, awesome!"
    She hung up.
    "what just happened?" said Brooke
    "yeah, who's David?" I said raising my eyebrow.
    "oh, some kid I know, he's a junior."
    Me and brooke just stood there speechless.
    A few minutes later a bright red corvette pulled up. That car looked amazing, it was a convertable, not the old kind, a high tech, sleek and smooth one. It was just glimmering.
    "oh my god." I stared with awe.
    Some guy who was about 5'9" got out and took off his shades, gotta say he looked pretty epic. He had brown hair with blonde highlights and green eyes and a cool grin on his face.
    "sup?" he said casually
    "hey David." Jordan said. "Nice car."
    "Thanks, my dad got it for my birthday."
    Me and Brooke were still stunned.
    David laughed, "cmon kids" he said opening the door for us.
    "shotgun." said Jordan
    Brooke looked at me with a "what's-going-on" look, I shrugged and climbed in the car. The seats were black he had a radio and speakers with a GPS system. Seriously..this car was amazing. I just can't describe it.
    "so um David, do you know where chase lives?"
    "yeah, he's an awesome kid. Why are we going over here again?"
    "cuz she wants to check up on her lover and make sure he's not too lovesick" said jordan.
    "whatever! I just want to make sure he's okay." I said opposingly
    David smiled, "alright kids." he said putting his shades on, "fasten your seatbelts, it's gonna be a bumpy ride"
    "what the heck, this isn't a movie!" I said. He stuck his tongue at me and zoomed down to chases' house.
     
  6. Bump! Update again!
     
  7. This is reallyyy gooooood!!!!!!!!:)
     
  8. Listen to Chases heart beat; it's saying b-b-bump b-b-bump!
     
  9. Update 

    Rachels POV

    "we're here!" David said happily
    "thank god I'm alive!" I said
    "I didn't know a car could go that fast! I thought I was gonna die!" said Brooke
    "what are y'all talkin about?! That was awesome!!!!" said Jordan
    "cmon, let's go say hi" I said getting out the car anxiously.
    "uhhh yeah this is something you gotta do on your own." said Jordan
    "what?! No! I can't go in there alone! What if something happens!"
    "ehh, you'll be fine" said Jordan "we're goin to mcdonalds, call us when your done kid."
    "Wait! But-"
    They drove off already.
    "uggghhh" I groaned as I walked up to the doorstep and nervously rang the doorbell. The door opened and a middle-aged woman opened the door.
    "hi, I'm here to see chase?"
    "oh, hello. You must be Rachel." she said smiling.
    "uh, you know my name?" I asked.
    "chase has mentioned you before, you're a beautiful young lady."
    I smiled, "thank you Mrs.....uhh"
    "___________" she said joyfully
    "mrs. ___________" I nodded.
    I stepped in the house and closed the door, as she led me up the Stairs.
    She knocked on the door. "chase, you have company sweetie." she said poking her head between the door.
    "there you go, would you like something to drink?" she asked
    "no thank you" I said politely.
    I walked in his room, it had red walls, a big Xbox system on one side and a black guitar laying in a chair, and he had a closet and a bathroom. And I stared at him laying on his bed, his head was barely poking out of the covers. But I saw his black swayed hair and his shiny brown eyes staring at me with passion.
    "hey." he said with his voice low and ragged.
    "woah" I said suprised.
    He smiled, "sorry, it's what happens when you're sick."
    "haha it's okay, I know." I smiled.
    I walked over to him while he adjusted himself and sat up.
    "whatcha doin here dollface?" he questioned.
     
  10. Chases POV:
    Ughh, I hate when I'm sick. You're probably thinking its cuz..well I'm sick right? Well I'm okay I guess I just feel like crap . It's cuz I miss Rachel, I swear if I don't get a text from her or something I'm going to freak. She's so amazing. I wish I could see her, that gorgeous smile...it just brightens my day.I can't go a day without seeing her, she's so special. I wonder if she misses me too, I hope that jacket keeps her warm.
    All of a sudden my thoughts are interrupted by a knock on my door.
    "chase sweetie, you have some company." said my mothers voice.
    Company? Who could it be, eh I'm sure it's not her, it probably doesn't matter to her.
    I see a head poke in and slip through my door as my mom walks off. Brown shoulder-length hair, hazel sparkling eyes, black skinny jeans,my red jacket, red vans and a red checkered bow. No way....No.Way.