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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -CandyMaggie-, Mar 2, 2012.

  1. Well this is the first time I write a story here  so plz don't be mean if you don't like it... Is based on my story here... Only based that means is not the exact same lol so any similarity with reality is just coincidence

    Thanks

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    Maggie's Love story
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    I walk in as usual holding hands with Drake walking toward our usual table at lunch, thats when my heart stopped and I start to breath faster noticing my free hand was curling into a fist and my eyes were staring at him and her, holding hands and staring at each other while he gave her a gummy bears, he used to give me! gummy bears, he used to hold my! hand he used to be mine! At that moment Drake stoped and stared at me asking me-

    "Baby whats wrong?" I closed my eyes clearing my mind from that horrible picture and answer-

    "nothing hun don't worry I just got a stomach ache" he stroke my cheek softly,

    "Babe you sure? You seem ungry" I stare down and took a deep breath

    "yes I'm sure don't worry"

    We keep walking in silence holding hands, while I was thinking why am I feeling like that? I am with Drake now, after all I was the one who broke up with Peter, I did it for Drake cause I love him so why am I jealous? While I think all this ,Drake went to get some chips while I wait siting down looking outside thru the wide window just remembering things, thats when I felt something touch my cheek, I turned around and saw it was Peter-

    "Hey Maggie! Want some gummy bears?"

    I stared at him, didn't know what to say we were supposed to be friends, I was not supposed to be jealous...

    "hey Pete!..mm no thanks I umm I'm waiting for my chips maybe later thanks"

    We sat there for a moment, very quiet while he chew some blue gummy bear...

    "So how are you Maggie? Haven't talk to you since we went to eat ice cream last week"

    "I'm good... I know been really busy lately with all these prom preparations...you coming right?"

    He look back to where Pia was seating, and smile but not a I'm happy smile it was more like a smile with some sadness and pain in it..

    "Hmm yes I'm coming even tho idk if Pia wants to come shes been acting weird lately"
    he stared down for a bit and bit his lip..
    "oh well I'll ask her later I suppose your going with Drake"

    "Umm yes I am, I mean with who else am I going to go? Haha"

    "haha yeah your right" he stand up and leave me a bag of gummy bears..
    "well gotta get back to Pia laters Maggie"...
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    After that awkard conversation My day go on as usual, math, quemistry, prom, but I was glad I was enjoying it, it was my last year finally a senior I got everything you could ask for, I was popular, had the best friends ever, finally got my own car, and I had a boyfriend, wich I love so much that I risk my relationship with Pete just for him, Is not that we are best friends now but we are not enemies at all just friends...
    I eat dinner, watch some tv and just rest I didn't feel like going out or get in my laptop I was upset.. But I don't why was I more upset because I was jealous or because I was realizing I still love Pete..
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  2. Love it maria  BUMP
     
  3. Bump
     
  4. Nice one Maria  never new you were on fan Fic 
     
  5. Mariaaaa!!  Bump!! 
     
  6. Bump! 
     
  7. Update!
     
  8. Josh!! I didn't knew it neither!!  but idk inspiration came to me magically! and I feel like writing lol


    ᏰᏌᏌᏌᏌᏌᏌᏌᎷᎷᎷᎮ!
     
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    After that horrible day, the week coudn't get any better Drake and I had a fight why? Oh simple he was jealous! Jealous because I had to go and study with Pete, he is my Math tutor since I'm not that good at numbers he was the one always helping me, but I was not going to fail at math just because of Drake's temper problems. He just had to deal with that..
    I was feeling really bad I hate when We fight, I know he have this temper issue and that he gets mad pretty easy but still why he always have to get mad at me?!.. I never understand that, it only makes me sad....
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    "Maggie!!" Rosie said hugging me tight.

    "Rosie!.. I'm glad you came didn't thought you'll make it" I said hugging her back.

    "How could I not make it!? You are my best friend I'm here for you no matter what"
    She said smiling, her smile somehow always made me feel better like I know she was telling the truth.
    "Now.. Are we going to get some ice cream? Cause I'm starving for something sugary!"

    We both laugh, Grabbing our bags we head out the door and walk towards our favorite Fro-Yo place, we usually go there to eat frozen yogurt every friday but since I started dating Drake she somehow all of sudden was always busy.. I know she is not Drake's #1 fan, but she doesn't hate him at all, like she said "I just don't like him Mag, not after what he did to you".
    I know Drake screw things up when he broke up with me last summer because he needed a time.. A time for me to find out he was going out with Pearl, his "best friend", he really broke my heart that time, but I don't know why but I forgive him and we got back together, I guess I just love him so much that all I wanted was to be with him even tho that means that I had to broke up with Pete and loose everything we had...
    But still I was happy at that moment Rosie made it after all the things happening, so I was not gonna start arguing with her about that...
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    We got to Frozen Berry and we order the usual, natural flavor with mango and kiwi for me and chocolate with grapes and strawberries for her, we sat down and start to eat well at least she was eating I was just playing with my spoon looking down my fro-yo...

    "Maggie.. Whats wrong? You haven't even taste your yogurt!" she asked with some concern in her voice.

    I look up and try to smile..
    "Umm.. Idk All of a sudden I'm not hungry anymore"

    She put her spoon down and look me in the eyes very seriously.
    "Maggie" she sighed.. "Tell me what's wrong I know you and I know your not ok"
    At that moment I coudn't hold it together I just crash and start crying hugging Rosie very tight...
    All I needed was to let out all that stress and feelings I had at that moment...
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  10.  Bump! OR!  Froggy here. Goes boom. 
     
  11. Bump
     
  12. WifeyI love itthanks for putting me in itBUMP!!!Ppl better be bumping this coz it's amazing
     
  13. maria!!!! I c u writing stories a home never like this! like u must get it from me jk this is spectacular
     
  14. Wifey! Lil sis! you better be bumping this! Otherwise no ice cream with whipped cream for both of you!
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  15. I want my ice cream with whipped cream!Bump! bump! bump! 