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Update: I blush deeply. "He's...different." "Mhm. I saw how you reacted when he kissed your hand." she says grinning. "Ian was whispering something in your ear! We don't even know them!" She sighs. "I know and it's not safe. We need to know them better." "Let's see. I'll find out about Ian." I grin, giving her horror. It quickly fades though. "Okay," she starts. Her eyes fall on me for a second. Then they fall back on the road. A street light turns red AMD she stops. I take out my IPhone4 and start to take a video. "I'm Arianna and this is Savannah. Oh savannah the light green!" Savannah steps on the gas, just as someone dashes forward, hoping to get across. I scream, still holding the phone. A horror movie scream. "SAVANNAH!" I yell. I place my body over hers as the cars make contact. The monster truck forces the Jeep up a few feet and flips it's over. Savannah and I scream the whole time. Savannah starts crying and the videos still on. We land upside down. I'm knocked out. What I don't see is that the phones survived and Ian along with Caleb stand in the corner of the street. Savannah protectively wraps an arm around me before blacking out. The camera on the phone catches everything.
Chapter 3: I wake up in a green ad white hospital bed. What's happening? Wheres Savannah? Savannah, the car, Caleb and Ian. "No, no, no, no, no!" I scream, sitting up, thrashing around. Doctors rush in and I try to get out of the bed, but falling due to a huge stitching on my left arm. "Ah!" I groan and fall, hot tears streaming down my face. "Savannah! SAVANNAH!" I cry. I push myself against the wall and cry, rocking back and forth. Someone picks me up and carries me to the bed, smoothing my hair back. Caleb, I know from his eyes. "Caleb.." I whimper. "Shhhh." he says, planting a kiss on my forehead. "Where's Savannah?" "Shes fine Arianna, she's going to be okay." "Really?" "Promise." He draws me close and let's me cry. I cling to his button-down dark red shirt and shiver as I cry. I know I screamed because he places my face on his chest. I start hiccuping from my frantic cries. "Shhhh, it's okay Arianna, I'm here." he reasures. "It's all my fault Caleb! If only-" He kisses me, I barely know him! It seems like a last second kind of thing though, since it's a rough one. For a few seconds I'm in shock. Then I melt into him and I'm kissing him back. The kiss deepens and he tucks my hair back behind my ear. "Caleb!" "I-Ian!" Caleb stammers when he pulls away from me. "Outside. Now. We have to go." "No." "Caleb! Father is waiting." he exaggerates 'father.' Ian walks out and Caleb looks at me lovingly. "I'll always be with you Arianna." he says, pulling me close. I feel self-conscious because of my huge chest, but I blow it off by smiling. He kisses me on the cheek and carefully places me down on the bed. "Close your eyes Hun, I'll be back." he whispers into my ear. His silk-like voice allows me to close my eyes. I see him walk out of the room with one last glance back at me before I fall into a fitfull sleep.