The Other Guy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ThisIsJoycee (01), Nov 29, 2011.

  1. SF-CANDY: Aw...thank yeuuu

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  2. Heyo! So I really missed ya guys ad I apologize for giving short updtes an only for like once a week or not even close. So Imma make it up to you guys.

    That's right people! I'm doing a TRIPLE update! 

    Because I love you guys  So yeah, hope you like it and keep bumpin'

    Here's my FIRST:
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    Sophie's POV

    Eye-catching, uh-mazing, breathtaking kind of guy.

    HE . WAS . HOT

    Will Blake was a foreign exchange student from London.

    YES, he had that sexy british accent and

    YES, he had a mega-watt smile that could just make my heart melt.

    I walked up to him, suddenly feeling confident for the first time.

    "Hey I'm -"

    *RIIIIIIIIING!!*

    I was rudely interrupted by the bell.


    Stupid annoying bell.


    He smiled at me.

    (Yes, it was one of those cute smiles with dimples and all that I was recently gushing about.

    I smiled back, trying my best not to look disappointed.

    I turned my back at the same time as he did.

    I walked away and slipped right into my next class.
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  3. My SECOND:
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    Diana's POV

    I got into school thr next morning with my gloomy face on.

    I was counting in Austin to cheer me up from the whole Jade fiasco thing.

    Yes, people were still talking about it. Apparently it was the "hottest gossip yet" 

    I walked up to Sophie, hoping her bubbliness would cheer me up but as I faced her, I saw her with a copy of my gloomy face.

    "Hey. What's with you today?" I said in my monotone voice.

    "Nothing....

    Just a hot foreign exchange student namely "Will" who by the way probably thinks I'm not good enough for him. But you know... I don't really wanna talk about that right now." She inhaled for breath, after balbbering for quite some time.

    I gave her the weird look as she rolled her eyes.

    "So...what's with you?" She said in her own monotone voice.

    "Jade." One simple word escaped my mouth.

    She gave me a "I-get-it" look as we parted ways to our next class.

    As I entered I was greeted with stares.

    Some pleasent and well, some horrible from Jade's possy.

    I quietly got into my seat and was greeted with a new face.

    I instantly recognized him as Will, the guy who Sophie supposedly "didn't wanna talk about."

    "Hey." he smiled.

    British was it?

    "Hey." I smiled back.

    Definitely british.

    "So are we supposed to start copying notes now or...? You know what nevermind. I think I'll just listen... or should I just take down notes cuz I'm not really good at Biology. I mean it's great but you know..."

    My ears suddenly stopped listening from there....

    He was blabbering.

    He was undecisive.

    He was energetic.

    And He was definitely for Shophie.
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  4. My THIRD:

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    Jade's POV
    Tsk. Tsk. Tsk.

    These people do not know who they're dealing with.

    "AGAIN!" I screamed.

    Uggh...these people give me headaches.

    "I said CHLOE is on the BOTTOM of the pyramid. Do you want me to spell it for you? B-O-T-T-O-M. BOTTOM." I said the last word slowly.

    "What are you all straring at? Do the pyramid NOW!"

    This is why I keep a pack of aspirin in my gym bag.

    The gym doors opened only to reveal my date.

    Well, he was more of like a boyfriend really.

    "Hey cutie." I said as I twirled my hair and bit my lip.

    "Uh- hey." He said, smiling at me.

    "So... wanna hang out later? We can go to the new pizza place downtown it's really-" He cut me off as he slowly pressed his finger on my lips.

    That was HOT.

    "Uh-umm...I need to go. I have an extracurriculur activity to do." He said as he jogged up to the gym doors.

    "See you later Will!" I said, smiling.

    He is gonna be mine.
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    So did ya like it?

    Leavr comments and sugestions. Keep bumpin'
     
  5. THANKS TO Groovy Hyuga of the Red Cloudz for beig the FIRST bumper!
     
  6. NO THAT **** DID NOT TAKE WILL-AS-IN-ALEXANDER-LUDWIG-IN-THE-DARK-IS-RISING-BLAKE!

    IS THIS REVENGE FOR WHAT I DID TO YOU IN MOI STORY? 

    I'll give you PHHM! HE's pretty hot you know. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH OR YOU CAN BE A NUN -sticks tongue out- DONT BE A MEANIE! YOU TOLD ME THAT YOU'D GIVE ME WILL! 

    Or you could give me Seth-as-Alexander-in-Race-to-Witch-Mountain or Cato-as-Alexander-in-The-Hunger-Games.

    -shrugs- ANY, AS LONG AS ALEXANDER IS MINEEE! 

    Oh, yeah, BUMP!

    That's right, triple update! TOLD. YOU. SO. 
     
  7. MOI? Evil me? With Will? Hmm..weird!!
     
  8. OMG I just started reading this thread! I finally finished 48 pages!!!! I love it so much
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  9. OMG I just started reading this thread! I finally finished 48 pages!!!! I love it so much
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  10. Oops I wrote it twice
     
  11. bump!!!!! 




     
  12. Jade: Hahahaa yezz EVIL you with Will who by the way is BRITISH and SUPER CUTE and SUPER HOT!

    He's blonde AND he has BEAUTIFUL eyes so you should thank me