Cage of Eden

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Goldialocks, Feb 26, 2012.

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    Trapped. In this pitiful human world, with a bunch of fools excluding Eulinda.

    "Euphoria... Please... I need to go back to Paige..."

    The frail voice was trying to remain calm, but alas, my sensitive ears heard the panic in his tone of voice.

    "Shut up, Ciel. Your Paige, my Lluvia."

    Alcine was smoking his cigarette, sitting on the ground, eyeing Jaqueline. Said girl flushed and turned her back to said pervert, and I glared.

    "Alcine, your Lluvia? I pity that poor girl. Not only have you corrupted a human soul, but you're not worthy of even being five feet NEAR her. Your playboy attitude turns everybody off."

    The pervert spit the cigarette out before standing up, ready to aim a punch at me.

    "Oh, resorting to violence, are we? At least I know the reason why the Council decided to send you to Earth. Pitiful Alcine, you're not worthy of carrying the title of 'Angel'."

    "Seraphim," Jaqueline had corrected. I shook my head.

    "No, Jack. We are no longer worthy of carrying the title of 'Seraphim'. We've been degraded to 'Fallen'."

    The girl hung her head. I glanced over to Ciel, his face was in his hands and he was crying.

    "Honestly, those fools up in Heaven disgust me. Romance between mortals and immortals? It's pure innocence."

    Eulinda piped up, stroking Ciel's back. Alcine was giving me a filthy look, and I gave him a glare myself. If looks could kill, Alcine would've dropped dead by now.

    "Eu-Euphoria... Wh-where a-are we... P-paige... Please..."

    "Ciel, Paige is probably where you left her, sulkinf and crying. And no, don't ask me if I can help you find her. Probably not. I'm not sure if this is even Earth."

    The simplicity of it kills me inside. Council, merciless bastards who judge you. The rules in their rulebook are biased and hypocritical. Of course, they'd make Ciel and Alcine suffer. Ciel's already crying his balls off, and Alcine's being a tsundre as the Japanese would put it. Me? Oh. I just killed off a seedy looking character. That, is worthy of punishment. Jaqueline, however, is a different story.

    "Hey, Jack. How did you end up here anyway? With the runors floating around the Celestial Tower, you're pretty much an innocent saint."

    She flushed again, fiddling with her fingers. This girl makes me want to mentally slap myself. It's like she'll cry if I insult her.

    "Never... Nevermind."
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    The scenery was so cliché. It was the beginning of the Winter Solstice, Christmas, as the humans would put it. It was snowing, the flakes covering us in white. Ciel didn't mind though. He kept munbling about how Paige loved snow.

    "..."

    I frowned. Alcine was desperately flirting with every woman in sight. I have to applaud him, though. His way of gathering intel amuses me.

    "Eulinda, where should we stay?"

    "..."

    Silent. It's always silence with her.

    "Jaqueline?"

    "This city... It's so lively."

    She was lost. In a world of reminiscence and fragile memories. I waved her off. Her timidness gets to me sometimes.

    "... We are soooo pathetic."
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    Drama/Humor.

    Summary: Banned from Heaven where they belonged to. Turned into Fallen Angels. Bounty hunters, demons, everybody is after them. Of course, not the humans. Trying to find their lovers, or trying to find a way to find vengeance, they're sticking together to not risk the chance of being hunted one by one.
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    Hm. .-.
     
  2. Bump my Blizzy. <3
     
  3. BUMP!!
    But Blizzy,what about CA1? I'm super nervous and I'm on here during dinner. >.<
     
  4. CA1? .-.

    What's that, Tiff? :0
     
  5. I thought you're from SG? It's Continual Assessment 1(basically,exams)
     



  6. Sorry, I'm from China. :3

    Southern China, to be exact.
     
  7. Oh... I thought you were from SG 
     
  8. XD

    When people first look at me, they ask if I'm Vietnamese or something. .-.
     
  9. 
    People think I'm Japanese. -.-
     
  10. Orly? XD


    Once, a friend of my mom's asked if I was adopted. She asked why, and he told her that I looked Japanese as well. ._.
     
  11. 
    'cause my real name sounds Japanese -.- to the pm!
     
  12. Okay,my parents yelled at me for trying to reveal my real name -.- sorry Chloe-sama 
     
  13. I know your real name Tiffy. :3
     
  14. P.S. the Korean name I gave you is fake. I made it up myself. 
     
  15. D: So Kim isn't your real name?
    D:<
     
  16. This story is delicious 