My Poems and yours

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by SoulDerative442, Feb 24, 2012.

  1. Ello EVERYONE I am going to post my poems and I hope you enjoy them so please comment on what you think and You can post your poems here also so
    Words can't say much…but it's so hard to tell you how much beauty you have…your beauty is nothing like I never seen before…its like the most beautiful star in the sky…I love you and only you…there isn't anyone I would rather be with…the thing I'm my mind that I think of everyday is your face…your eyes are so beautiful…none like you at all…make my feelings and heart good around ya…I love you…you are my sunshine

    When I see your eyes I see that yours are blue and mine are red when I look at your eyes I see that your eyes are purple the color of our love for each other that will last forever

    When i see you I see the eyes of an angel that took my heart away from me but I'm glad because I know my heart is in the right place with the right person

    When we fight I see no treason to resist but when we fight I am just happy That we are talking to each other because Tht makes me feel closer to you when we don't talk I feel like their is nothing at all but when we fight at least we are communicating we hardly speak to each other because we fight so much but it brings our energy together

    When I get a heart attack don't worry its just that my heart failed
    To defend your love from me my defenders just give up because my heart is program to love you forever

    You are the light to my soul without you my soul is lost in sorrow and despair weeping in the corner waiting for the one true light to guide it you

    That's it so please comment on what you think and don't be afraid to post yours
     
  2. This dead all well
     
  3. Aww  this would make a very romantic poem for a girlfriend! It's beautiful! So full of emotion. It's heart warming