Shipwrecked Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *naomisoxy (01), Mar 7, 2011.

  1. This is incredible.
     
  2. I am gonna be impatient..... More!
     
  3. I am gonna spam this till u write more xD
     
  4. Charlie

    Damn! The bump was starting to swell.
    Nana and Bliz had left after gleefully dumping me in my room. I walked over to the fridge and grabbed a can of frozen coke to place on the swell.
    There was a sudden knock on the door. "What?!" I said as I swung the door open.
    Before me stood a tall muscled man. I glanced at his name tag, 'Cyber'.
    I swallowed hard. "What can I do for you, err...Cyber?"
    "You're coming with me." he said in a low gruff voice.
    Before I had a chance retaliate, he picked me up and propped me on his shoulder like a sack of potatoes.
    At this sight, you would think that the people around who saw this would help, or even bother that I was held against my will, but NO... There was a bunch of girls who were all like "Omgosh! Charlie is being carried off by a big hunk! So cute! He looks like a puppy!" Blah blah. At that moment I realised what bimbos these girls were. Quite different from Nana's girl anyway.
    So here I was being carried around the ship and into a long corridor that I had never seen before.
    As a child I had always loved the sea, ships and what nots, and I had often followed my dad on his checks of the new ships that have been made, so one would think that I would know all about ships- which was true. But this place? I have never seen it before, not on any ship I have been into at least.
    The passageway was filled with long vertical transparent fibre glass cylinders that housed a luminous blue liquid. I was in pure awe. "What are these liquids?"
    "I am not at liberty to speak to you about anything."
    "Fine, whatever." I continued to study the long columns.
    Soon we came to a room that was fairly bright, as if the sun was shining straight into it, and a tall woman stood before me, her back towards my direction. She had long waist length hair, and she wore a long tight fitting White trench coat that stopped at her calves.
    The moment she heard us arrive, she turned around, and I was in awe when I looked at her. She had Amber coloured eyes, and the moment she looked at me, there was an unexplainable power that seemed to be emitting from her.
    "Hello Charles, we finally meet."

    Naomi

    I knew it, there wasn't much time left.
    I loaded up. My trusty pair of desert eagles were holstered at my lower back.
    Suddenly I heard a click at the door. I swiftly grabbed my blade and tip toed out of the room, making sure to make myself inconspicuous.
    I heard the footsteps in soft thumps on the parquet flooring. Hiding behind a wall divider, I could sense the human presence right on the opposite side. The presence continued to make it's way towards the corner section of the open wall. I tightened my grip on my blade handle, and kept it hidden by my wrist.
    A shadow came into sight right in front of me.
    Wait.
    Closer.
    Wait.
    I swung out and grabbed the intruder's arm, twisting it behind his back and slamming him against the wall, my blade to the neck.
    Wait. It's a she. I thought to myself.
    "Ow."
    "What are you doing here?" I tightened my grip on her wrist.
    "Well, well, is that any way to treat an old friend? It's been awhile Naomi."
    I frowned."it can't be."
    I looked down at her wrist, and a grey wolf was peeking out through the gaps in my fingers.
    "Qin!"
    I quickly released my grip. Qin turned around with a huge grin on her face. "Glad to see I'm still remembered."
    I pulled her into a bear hug. "Oh God, I'm so sorry!"
    "I expected it. You haven't lost your touch." she laughed. "Almost killed me there"
    "I can't believe it's really you!"
    "I couldn't believe it was you either!" she smiled, and held up my wrist. "This gave you away."

    Qin took a step back and scanned the room. "I'm guessing you're on a mission."
    I nodded.
    "Who?"
    "I'm about to find out."
    "You don't know who you're hunting?"
    I shook my head. "I'm not hunting this time Qin, I'm protecting."
    Qin shot me a quizzical look. "Charlie Sparrow." I replied.
    "Oh God, it's Nana's cousin."
    "You know him?"
    "Let's just say, I know him enough to want to save him."
    I opened the black duffel bag and tossed Qin some guns and blades. After briefing her on the mission, we headed out.
    "Oh, by the way... Who's Nana?"
    Qin gave a sheepish smile.
    "Okay, don't tell me." I laughed.
    "Is he cute?"
    "Of course!" she replied.
    "And he doesn't snore in bed?"
    "What?! Of course not!" She retaliated. And we both started giggling, almost as if those days from 8 years ago had never left us.
     
  5. Omg i friken love this story
     
  6. Omg soooo awesome nay nay 
     
  7. Qin, I haven't gotten to you yet, but if I don't think of something better, you're going to be blonde haired and blue eyed.
     
  8. Holy......I'm blonde?!?  im a brunette 
     
  9. Andrieth, You gotta draw yourself with Amber coloured eyes. 
     
  10. We draw ourselves the way we want to be described in the story?
     
  11. Are you gonna put a link to our pictures? And I got carried away by a big muscle man..... And nobody thought it was weird
     
  12. I've never imagined myself African american before... Oh well xD

    AND OMFG LOVELOVELOVE
     
  13. Horray I feel special kidnapping the main character. Plz dint let me die tho. Can I be a double agent
     
  14. It's cyber?!?!
     
  15. MORE MORE MORE PLEASE NAOMI * is dying of suspense *
     
  16. Okay! Why amber, though? 0.o
    If you want obvious features, though, just follow me and I'll friend you. You can tell me what you want. XD
     
  17. Andi, look up Genesis final fantasy for what I wanna look like, btw it's the red guy