Lol LEAVE MAH SISSY BEKZIE ALONE!!! She's a poet and now she knows it, she could probably rhyme anytime. Next time don't criticize what you don't like.
@-Black White- I thought poems were supposed to be deep. And have a greater understanding of the world. Or to tell a story. @LilySnape I'm not saying I didn't like it, it's just expand the poems so that it could like tell a more elaborate story. @ultra even if you used spellcheck it wouldnt work, lighting is a word and it wouldn't have noticed it. Kinda like everyone else before me.
SILENCE Bekka is a rapper who can rhyme any time and it's a crime because she stole a dime using a lime to pass some time
SHE'S AWESOME DEMON KING WHAT KIND OF CRITICISM IS THAT. SHE'S AN AWESOME POET!! but no one can be perfect!
@Ultra well okay, cuz if everyone else missed it and you wrote it, then... Also I can read, I was the only one that caught YOUR error didn't I? And I was calling out names I was giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. And it's called Constructive Criticism and it's not meant to hurt anyone it's meant to help build the writer he'll I need help too.