Just some random legit poems I wrote

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *UltraViolet_ (01), Feb 17, 2012.

  1. Maria the Bird-----
    Shadow was doing his usual thing, listening to dear Maria sing.
    He thought about the past, and the beauty of her singing, and it hurt so much he cried.
    Not much later, while she was still singing, some lighting appeared and struck poor Maria dead, now shadow in shear pain, killed himself, never wanting to be alive again.
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    The story it tells:
    Shadow doing what he does, hears a bird sing. He named it Maria, and one day, doing the daily stuff, he thought about the real Maria and cried his eyes out. Later on, the rain and clouds came, and lighting zapped the life out of Maria.
    It hurt shadow so much, that he killed himself.
    :3 I'll add some more on later...
     
  2. *snaps fingers like ports do* 
     
  3. *poets not ports 
     
  4. Nice job Imani.
     
  5. Cause I'll need to read it for a while to get it :3
     
  6. It's based on Sonic so...
     
  7. Why thank you.  oh no, It takes practice to fail like that. 
     
  8. M_E
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    There was rouge spying, on poor knuckles crying.
    There was the Master Emerald, shattered in pieces, meanwhile Tikal changed her wrong chaos thesis.
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    STORY:
    So knuckles is crying because he failed to do his job.
    Rouge is spying on him.
    Tikal thought it would last longer, but was wrong.
     
  9. IM GLAD I CAN UNDERSTAND THEM AFTER A RE-READ don't worry I just don't understand literature well
     
  10. I just skim through. :p
     
  11. First off lighting? It's lightning. Emphasis on the N lol. Ur just saying like the light, lighting the stage. Lightning Is what comes from the sky.
     
  12. Fu demon king critize my pinkehs work again and I'll slaughter chu with a toasta!!!
     
  13. Lol. Just the poems don't seem to mean anything. No offense to the author, but what are you trying to say with these poems
     
  14. It's criticize by the way.
     
  15. Shut yo damn mouth I'll speak how I want
     
  16. I am a person.

    Poems do not need meanings.

    Der