Adam! Haha I didn't know you wrote ... Well, this is quite awesome. Really nicely done Try being a little bit less concise, perhaps.
Still looking at me as if I shot her in the heart. The tears starting to come down. She rushed to bathroom real quick... I didn't bother following. About 30 minutes later I got a knock on the door. It was Claudia, this girl had a crush on me since the 6th grade. But I haven't seen her in a long time, she looked beautiful with long black hair, the face of an angel... She started to say "Hey, I was just wondering if you wanted to-" She stopped cold, she saw Abby behind me, she came out of the bathroom I presume... I turned around, she was naked. What the hell!? "It's not what it looks like!" I shout. "What is then!? I thought you were different!" She quickly slapped me, I could have caught but I decided it was best to let her do it... "I don't like her!" I continued, "She showed up and wanted to watch a few movies, I made her upset and she came out of the bathroom like that! I know it sounds bad..." She saw the truth in my eyes, and ran up and kissed me... Find out what happens next if you bump! ^.^
The next thing I remember is waking up in bed, dressed, oh thank god. I'm not ready for that commitment, not now... I went and looked in the mirror, and found a note on my head. "Thanks for the great night!-Claudia" "What did I do last night?" I whispered to myself. I checked my phone for messages... "Hey Wesley, it's Claudia! I just wanted to know if you're still on for our date tonight? I can't wait!" Whatever happened to me, I guess I have a girlfriend now... One more message... "Hey Wesley... I'm so sorry about what I did last night, I don't know what I was thinking... I just care about you a lot. Do you think we could have one more date? Call me!" Of course, she's so consistent... I'll call back this once. "Hello?" "Hey, it's Wes." "Oh, hey babe!" "Why are you calling me babe?" "We went on a date last night, I thought we were going out?" "No, why would you think that?" "Just because I got mad you think I don't like you anymore? No, I love you." I've wanted to hear that for a year and a half, but it just wasn't right! "We are not going out, don't call again. Please." "Ring ring." Claudia. "Hello?" "Wes! How about that date? You enjoyed last night didn't you?" "Uh...what did I do last night?" "We made out, and we were about to go farther but you said it's not a right time. I so respect you for doing that, I didn't think you'd hold yourself back like that." "Yeah, I respect boundaries... So, about that date... When was it again?" "7:00, are we still on?" "Yeah." She hung up... It's time to figure out what to do... Want more? Bump! Lol
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"Hey Claudia." "Hey Wesley." She gave me a smile that I could read like a book. She was in love with me, I knew it. Did I feel the same way though? "So Claudia, how are you?" "I love how you always ask how are you instead of what's up... It's makes me feel like you genuinely care." "I do." I heard a loud noise. It sounded like a gunshot, next thing I know my date falls to the ground. She's not the only one, the attacker shot 3 other people. Why would you do this in a restaurant? "NO!" I shouted, catching her before she can actually hit the ground. A guy comes up and helps us, that's when he sees us... He quickly walks towards me with a gun. Holding it to my head, he says "It's your lucky day, you are my hostage so you get to live." I had one second to think, my only chance, I grabbed his wrist twisting it and the gun fired once into the wall. I took the gun and held it to his face. "You shot her," I continued, sadness in my voice, "I figured I'd return the favor." I pointed to his legs shooting both of them. What was I doing!? I just shot a man! I unloaded the clip and threw it as far as I could. I rushed to Claudia's side, faintly breathing... The ambulance couldn't get through the heavy traffic. Neither could I if I tried. The hospital is only a block away, without thinking I picked her up and started running. I don't know where the strength came from, or where the sheer will came to save her. But I do know it was there, I didn't stop for a second, I remember collapsing on the hospital floor shouting "HELP!" They took her to a room, and I passed out from the exhaustion... Bump for more!