So, I've never done fan fiction... I figured I'd give it a shot... I see her, usually beautiful, but not today. For some reason she looks deprived of sleep... Why should I care? She rejected me 3 weeks ago when I asked her out. It destroyed me... I gathered up the confidence to do that for like a month... Something odd is going on today though. "Hey Wesley." she never talks to me, what is going on? "Hey...Abby..." She said "Why are you so nervous talking to me?" I quickly replied, "You rejected me after incessant flirting, and you don't expect me to not want to talk to you?" Whoa, where did that come from? I never stand up for myself... "Look, I'm sorry..." she says. I say "No, no more sorries, go talk to your boyfriend about sorries." I continue to talk, "For a year and a half I had a crush on you, and you did that to me." She says "I'm sorry...!" I say "SHUT UP! I don't want to hear it anymore, you keep messing with my head and I'm done!" More to come if you give the bump things... This is my first story... I need characters... I need age/name/gender/personality. You can even make up a character, I don't care. Haha This is just for fun. It started out lame I know, but I plan to improve it a lot. ^.^
This has a really good concept! Sophie Tanner Whatever the age is in your story Nice, fun, creative Blond hair, green eyes, tall. Can I make a suggestion? Paragraphs. Or spaces before speaking so it will be more evident on who is talking. Besides that, great story!
Next day, I am walking to school, when her car pulls up to me... "Wesley! We need to talk!" That's when I see my friend Sophie, she always helped me when I needed it... I ran up to her and started talking to her while I looked behind me... There, I saw Abby, crying... Why was she crying? For a second I felt the feeling of sadness, I felt like a cloud of melancholy had washed over me. Endeavoring to try to hold in a tear... Maybe I care for her after all... Mixed emotions, feels like I launched a propaganda against myself trying to persuade myself I was not feeling sad... Sitting, in her car, crying still, I just walked forward like I didn't care... Maybe I did? I will get into more personal details about the characters next time...
Could you read my storues, Different and Crush On You? I'll give your story a shoutout if you want.
Summer Woods Whatever age Bubbly, sweet, and funny. Auburn hair, green eyes, short. Your story is good! Bump!
@Andi I have seen your stories, they are very good. ^.^ If you could give my story a shout out it'd be great.
I'm at home, on a Friday, pretending I'm sick just because I don't want to see her. What was happening? I keep having these emotions like I feel sad for her. I shouldn't care, I shouldn't even look her direction... Somehow I couldn't stop thinking about her. "RING RING!" The phone... I pick up and say hello and hear a faint voice on the other end. "Hello Wesley... Please don't hang up-" "Where are you? You sound sick." "I-I am at the hospital..." Wait, I know who it is now, it's her, it's Abby. "Why are you calling me then?" "I need to talk to you..." "Talk then." "I broke up with my boyfriend, and he was like you said. He beat me... I should've listened... Now I'm in the hospital because of him. I should have went out with you instead. So, how about we give it a try?" I hear the my cell phone ring in my pocket and tell her to hold on. "Hello?" "Hey, it's summer!" "It's not really a goo-" "Meet me in an hour, at "the place." All I could think was, what was happening... I quickly realized Abby was waiting for an answer... I said... Find out what he says next. ^.^ Bump this story! Lol I'll give you a hint, it takes a really big twist next. ^.^
My reply was "One date, after that, we'll see what happens." I hung up instantly... "The place" is a run down park we used to meet to hang out alone... I remember warm nights without pressure to do something idiotic... We were younger then, and I haven't talked to her in like 2 years. I miss it. I got in my car, and I drove there. "Hey!" I yelled "I haven't talked to you in like 2 years, what is going on?" I saw her step out from the shadows, she wasn't alone, Abby's ex-boyfriend was with her. I was pissed, I hated him with a passion. "Hey," he said "how is Abby?" He sounded sincere, and I hated it... That's when I remembered I took mixed martial-arts since I was 12. I'm 16 now. I could kill him so easily. "You b*stard!" I said "You hurt her!" I lunged at him, and punched him in the stomach and when he kneeled in pain, I followed with a perfect kick to the face. Summer was yelling stop this whole time. I was about to kill him, my blood boiling in my veins! Then I looked at him, on the ground, blood coming from his face... "You're pathetic, hitting girls because you're afraid of someone your own size!" I said furiously, "I will kill you if you do anything like that again!" I stormed off to my car, where I drove off to my house... I jumped in bed, I could've swore I slept for a week, but it was only 8 hours... Want more? Bump me! Lol
Gratzie signora. Otherwise known as Thank you madam. ^.^ I appreciate it. Ps. Taking more characters. I need a girl that is kind of flirtatious, you will figure out why. Lol Anyone can be her.
Our date is today. I can't tell you how much I resent even saying "one date." "Knock knock." My door, our date is not for an hour... I answered the door and she was standing there with a short skirt and a low-cut shirt with a box of pizza and 3 DVD's... What is she planning? "Are you gonna invite me in?" she says with a seductive smile. "I figured we could just stay here and watch a few DVD's." "Uh yeah...sure..." "You sound nervous." "Well, no, I'm just staring at your shirt, it's a little, um...low-cut..." She comes close to me and puts her lips but a short distance away from mine... "I thought you'd like it." she says with a flirtatious tone. What the hell? "Let's just watch the movies..." "If you want." After watching all 3 she started to climb on top of me on the couch... My hormones said "here is your chance!" I did something I never thought I'd do... I said, "NO!" "You don't want me?" "I did, but this is ridiculous! You come in here expecting to seduce me and everything will be fine!? I am not that easy, NOT ANYMORE!" I said it with such ferocity I saw her go limp, she could help but freeze in place... I couldn't even tell what she was thinking, but I was going to find out. Bump for more!