Luscious Locks

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Im-sexy-and-i-know-it-baby1234 (01), Feb 12, 2012.

  1. Does it count if I bump again?
     
  2. .-.
    Add yes/no to the end. Then yes.
     
  3. YAY!!
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    There now yew can update
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  4. --That night--
    "Mom can I drive tonight?" Diana asked her mother. Mrs. Roosevelt (let's just call her Evelyn for now) nodded and climbed into the passenger seat. Diana got in the driver's.
    As they sped away, Evelyn became more nervous by the second. She gripped the thing-that-helps-you-get-in until her knuckles turned white. Diana looks over and whispered "It's alright Mother."
    Diana turned. The last thing she heard before she lost consciousness was her mother's scream.

    -The hospital (again)-
    *beep. beep. beep.* The heart monitor beeping might've been the only thing that kept Sam, Matt, and Lee-Ann from crying. Sam squeezed Diana's hand, as if it could keep her alive. Lee-Ann had to buy a new box of tissues every hour. It was a very sad night; Diana unconscious; Evelyn's face cut by windshield glass; KiKi beaten half to death. Nobody had dry eyes when they left. But, nobody knew that Death was walking the hallways of Albuquerque General Hospital, looking for one specific person in one specific room.




     So, How'd you like that part? (;
     
  5. Lurve it how come I don't get a hand squeeze?!
    Lawl TROLOLOLOLOLOLO
    Box of tissues every hour?! TROLOLOLOLOLOLO
     
  6. Bumperz!!!!!

    Hahaha, heyyy. 
     
  7.  Updating sooooon(; It's gonna be sad  I'm sad and I'm writing it! lol
     
  8. --The next day--

    "Diana. Diana, wake up baby." Sam whispered. Lee-Ann and Matt were next to him, still sniffling. (Sniffling is reduced today) Diana had gained her consciousness overnight. She smiled a little, then turned to Sam. "Sam, what happened last night? I can't remember..."
    Sam just patted her hand and said "I'll tell you later. You need to get better first." He got up and kissed her forehead, then went outside with Lee-Ann and Matt trailing behind him.

    -Kierra's room-
    Kierra slowly opened her eyes, followed by squinting. The sun was too bright. She heard footsteps enter the room. "Oh, it's the nurse..." she thought. But Matt came walking in, instead. She smiled weakly. He sat down beside her and squeezed her hand, lightly. KiKi sighed. "I have the best boyfriend ever." She said.
    Matt nodded. "I know baby."
    "I'm sorry sir, you have to leave for now. We have to do a small surgery on her hand. It will only take about half an hour. We'll call you when you can come back." Matt nodded, squeezed Kierra's hand, and left.

    --Sub-Ending-- (getting fancy huh? lol)
    Swish. Death avoided yet another doctor. He may be invisible, but he's still solid.
    Thoughts: Room 623, 624, 625, 626! Finally. My next victim.
    Reality: Death peeked around the corner, then tiptoed in. If he kissed this patient, she would become his. Forever. Death hovered over the bed, feeling the woman's face, arms. He leaned down, closer, closer to this female's death. Death was so close, he could feel the breath coming out of the body. Slowly, he kissed her, so full of force and passion.

    -Ending -
    "Diana, I have some bad news."
    Diana looked up from a magazine Sam brought her. Lee-Ann was standing in the doorway, another box of tissues in her hand. Sam walked in and sat beside Diana, ready to catch any tears that fell.
    Lee-Ann continued. "You see...during Kierra's surgery...Death visited your mother's room.
    The world seemed to be silent for a moment. Then tears steadily poured down Diana's face as Sam tried to hug her.

    -The funeral-

    "Ladies and gentlemen. I am very sad, these young ladies and men are very sad also, to announce the death of Evelyn Laurel Foster-Roosevelt. Family, friends visit her today to say their farewells. God has led her through life, given her a husband, a son, and two wonderful daughters. We will miss her dearly."

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    Sad, eh? Yeah, I know.
    Comment and bump<3
     
  9.  I'm mad at myself for killing Evelyn. lawl.

    Update soon loves
     
  10. So I'm just gonna post the news report on the death.

    -CNN BREAKING NEWS-
    "Evelyn Laurel Foster-Roosevelt died three days ago. Her daughter, Diana Lynn Roosevelt, crashed into a Werner semi truck Thursday, and the following morning, Death visited Evelyn. Her burial is scheduled today at 4:00 PM. Evelyn suffered severe glass cuts on her face and arms, and Diana has a broken leg and fractured arm."
     
  11. Hmm.
    What to write what to write....