He woke up in a cold sweat. He blinked then looked at the clock. 4:30. He groaned. James got out of bed and walked to the bathroom. Hrme washed his face and looked at his reflection. Hir peircing blue eyes stood out under his dark black hair. His features were the but sharp. He looked at himself he was pretty well built for on 15. He took a shower then went for breakfast. "hey james!" James turned to see eric running over to him, "hey eric wats been happening" "nuthing much man, but hey there is this new girl in school and she is smoking" eric curled hos fingers and pronoumced the word. "well she sounds like a prep so us outcasts aint got no chance" they laugjed and headed into the diner for breakfast...
As they walked in eric jumped to a stop. He threw his hamds on james chest and pointed. Standing at the front of the line was one of the hottest girls james had ever seen. She had brown hair and green eyes. By the looks of her tan she looked to be from california. She turned to james and saw he was staring. She blushed and turned away. "dude thts the girl," he looked at james. " and it looked like she was giving u the eye." eric punched his arm, "way to go." James only stared at the girl as she git her food and left he snapped out of his gaze. He looked at eric and anounced. "she's mine."
Please use better Grammar and slow your story down a bit. Instead of writing u write you Instead of writing tht write that. ;P
@ultraviolet ik the grammar sucks i go through and check it but when i post it i see the mistakes im new at this so let give me a chance to fix it
Eric and james ordered there food and sat at a table. "what do you know about her?" james asked. Eric was one of those peopl who knew everything about everyone if you wanted information you went to him' "only that she is from california." james stared at him, " really? Thats all you know?" eric smiled back, "she moved here yesterday, she enrolled at our school and i heard she was from california." james stared at the table for a few minutes. he stood to throw his trash away, "well let me know when u get any more info. K?" eric smiled, "no problem."
As they walked into school they split up sense they had different classes. As james went to his locker to get his clothes he saw the varsity players. They were looking at him and laughing. James sighed and grabbed his stuff. When he was changed he went into the gym and saw that there was a crowd. He blew it off, probably some new phone. He went and leaned against the wall. As the teacher came in he walked over to the crowd. Thats when he saw the reason for the commotion the new girl was standing there in the center talking to people and blushing real bad. Coach jerald called attention and introduced the girl as victoria. James couldnt help smiling at that. She never looked up from the ground. Coach said we were doing tennis today and as usual james was the only one without a partner. But it was different today cause bictoria didn't have a partner either. He smiled and walked over to her. "hey its victoria, right?" he asked with a smile. She laughed, "yea." she looked up she smiled and her green eyes shone. "you need a partner?" he asked her and she nodded. He gave her a racket and all he could say was that was one of his best gym classes ever.