That night..

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xxalyssaxx, Feb 10, 2012.

  1. Hi. My name is Renee Flora Bloomfield. One night..my friends and I were having a sleepover. Kelly Neverdess, Lisa Ambush.

    "What do you think Carl would get me for Valentine's Day?" Lisa said, rolling onto a cushion.

    "Dunno. I don't care. " Kelly stared absentmindedly at my computer.

    Kelly suddenly collapsed into the wall, and it revealed a secret door, hidden in the depths of the earth.

    "Renee! Lisa! I don't think it's another wardrobe space.." she stared at the door.

    And that was when trouble began.
     
  2. OMFG ITS NARNIA! 

    -Cries- FOR ASLAN! 
     
  3. "is it safe? " Lisa asked anxiously.

    "I don't care about safe! Let's just go!" I snapped. I was excited.

    Lisa's face was full of hurt. "Sorry..Lisa. " I apologized.

    I climbed down the stairs, and that was my first big mistake.
     
  4. When all of us were inside, I heard the crackle of fire, and the walls, which looked like they belonged to a cave, lit up with old-fashioned some sort of fire holders.

    Lisa gasped. "I-I don't feel good about this, Renee.." she whimpered. I was scared, but I did not show it.

    After some rough talking to Lisa, we finally moved. More fires lit up, and, I heard a bloodcurdling scream from Lisa. At our feet, lay a pool of blood, and a lifeless body.
     
  5. OH SNAP. JADE THIS IS AWESOME (sorry that i still call you Jade, I got used to sayin that. ) BUMP!
     
  6. Haha it's fine Andi. My name is actually Jade.
     
  7. Lisa turned white. "K-Kelly?" the girl that was Kelly was now lifeless, and her body was right in front of us.

    Someone just murdered my best friend. And she was in front of me. "Renee..I must tell you something.." She didn't dare look me in the eyes.

    "I am not a human. "
     
  8. Bump!!!!!!!!!

    Oh really? Well, my name isn't Andi. 
     
  9. Oh SNAP
    BRING
    UP
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  10. I stated at her, exasperated. This wasn't a good time to joke.

    "Lisa, I see my friend's body in front of me, this is not a good time to make a joke. "

    "I'm serious. RENEE!! Renee!"