This is a remembrance for the 100th year since the Titanic sank. Enjoy! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I smiled at Paige as she uttered nonsense to Thomas, "Then we went and played with the fishies..." I chuckled and turned back to the letter I was writing to my Mother and Father. As I wrote, the boat jolted and my ink spilled over the letter. "Momma what was that...?" I could hear the fear in Paiges voice. She looked at me with terror in her eyes. I smiled reassuringly at her. "I'm sure it's nothing, dear." She hugged her teddy bear and nodded.
Thomas grinned at me, then turned to the door, silently closing it behind him. I glanced at the now ruined letterabd sighed. Paige pouted. "You promised you would play." I opened my mouth to answer her but stopped as I heard a sudden rush of feet and screaming. Thomas darted back in his eyes full of worry. "Jessica, the ship may be sinking." I rolled my eyes and picked Paige up. Glancing at him in disbelief. "Impossible Thomas. This is the Titanic. It's unsink-" I was cut off. Captain Smiths voice spoke through the speaker. I could hear the worry in his voice but I could tell he was trying to stay calm. The next words he said caused a rush of panic.
it's an ok start. I wish for more details on maybe we the characters are. And one spelling error I think. Other then that it's very suspenseful. I'm interested in reading what happens next. So you have deserved an official Bump